Kk0061

Peer Review

NPOV

Great. I thought the author’s language was very balanced and did not lend undue weight to any argument, despite the fact that this topic is controversial.

Sources

Diverse and well chosen. I do not see any problems.

Little Things

Under “Geography:” I advise against use of the word “currently” – the author may want to just state the year or time period. I only say this because the page I’m working on was knocked for doing that.

Water Pollution: “Dissolved oxygen is highly important for the metabolic processes of many living organisms…” I suggest that the author avoids using adverbs like “highly.”

I believe the correct in-text citation format for endnotes is period then citation, rather than citation then period. I think.

Farmerleslie (talk) 01:18, 22 November 2015 (UTC)

Hi Kk0061

Welcome to Wikipedia! Madfs (talk) 19:33, 7 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi

I'm new to wikipedia too! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ktoconnell (talk • contribs) 19:34, 7 October 2015 (UTC)

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Tuna penning

Nice work on the tuna penning article. One thing I noticed - in your future trends section you didn't include any sources. It would be very helpful if you can add some. Nice work, nonetheless. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:51, 8 December 2015 (UTC)