Kilcurry1234

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draft comments

@Kilcurry1234: This is a good start. Suggestions: 1. You need additional sources. The single source used in the draft is insufficient to publish as an article on Wikipedia. Use jstor. Remember, a good strategy is to find a recent journal article or book and then consult its footnotes/bibliography to find additional sources. Can you find additional relevant sources from Snow's article? 2. The first two sentences of the lead do a good job of identifying the notability of the topic. The next few sentences should be part of the 'background' section rather than the lead. 3. Find out specific information on Scottish cities. For example, the soccer team Celtic, is an important part of the history of Irish immigration to Scotland. You need to dig a bit deeper to add more historical detail.

AugusteBlanqui (talk) 13:54, 22 July 2017 (UTC)