User talk:Kfoltz2/North Creek High School
Preliminary Review from Kaylea edit
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.
My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.
You've made some good choices in terms of sources, but you do seem to be pulling fairly heavily from a single source -- any organization's website is in the business of making it sound good. There's more detail about this issue in this policy: WP:OWNSITE -- the site has a conflict of interest when it speaks about itself. Just keep an eye on this as you revise and continue to make progress.
Kaylea Champion (talk) 21:54, 27 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review edit
Hey! I peer reviewed your article, and created a subpage answering the peer review prompt questions! Emilyngu3 (talk) 13:48, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
Page Merger edit
As we discussed, you both ended up doing the same article, and you agreed to work as a team. That's great! Before the merger, here is how your articles compared:
I merged the two together (leading to a bit of redundancy, but not too bad) and placed it here:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Khascall/North_Creek_High_School
Please go ahead and work together from that location from here forward, and let me know if you have any questions. We will be able to use the history command to view each of your contributions distinctly, and you'll be graded as individuals.
Kaylea Champion (talk) 20:54, 31 January 2022 (UTC)