User talk:Kclav15/North Creek High School
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!
You have done some very impressive work here -- just keep going in this direction. You are well-positioned to make a significant contribution to public knowledge of this topic. Bravo! I particularly appreciate your usage of good quality sources in this revision.
One area of improvement is copy-editing -- I saw a few missing periods in particular. A grammar checker would probably pick up on these issues as well.
Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:33, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
Work Migrated to New Location edit
As we discussed, you both ended up doing the same article, and you agreed to work as a team. That's great! Before the merger, here is how your articles compared:
I merged the two together (leading to a bit of redundancy, but not too bad) and placed it here:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Khascall/North_Creek_High_School
Please go ahead and work together from that location from here forward, and let me know if you have any questions. We will be able to use the history command to view each of your contributions distinctly, and you'll be graded as individuals.
Kaylea Champion (talk) 20:53, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review Feedback edit
Hi! I thought you had a good article draft, you added various additional information to the article which is great. Here's the link to my peer review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kclav15/North_Creek_High_School/Graceyi11_Peer_Review. I hope that this will help you in someway to advance your article even more! Graceyi11 (talk) 01:40, 1 February 2022 (UTC)Graceyi11