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Latest comment: 6 years ago by Elizabeth Linden Rahway in topic Instructor comments

Instructor comments

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It may have been a little early (based on the timeline, among other reasons) to move your edits to Wikipedia mainspace. Your edits would have benefited from a copy edit first, e.g., the redlink for APA - The Engineered Association could have been corrected to APA – The Engineered Wood Association. Please move the inline citation from the heading to each paragraph that you've added (using WP:Citing sources#Citing multiple pages of the same source to reduce redundant citations). Can you add at least one North American technical source or utilize those already cited in the article? Finally, please make sure that you are using the fields in citation templates correctly.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 03:52, 27 November 2017 (UTC)Reply