Juanitapat
Re Ciudad Juarez, violence against women. I have deleted the phrase "and timorous" from the modifying words about the actions of Mexican women, especially those in Ciudad Juarez to call attention to and to protest the femicides (feminicides, Sp.) occuring there for the last 20 years. Surely actions cannot be "heroic and timorous" so I cannot imagine what the original contributor meant to say.
I think the page is significantly incomplete; it says absolutely nothing about pornography and snuff films, next to nothing at all about the number of women who have been brutally raped and violated, and who show evidence of specifically sexual violence.
J20:30, 20 December 2012 (UTC)20:30, 20 December 2012 (UTC)20:30, 20 December 2012 (UTC)Juanitapat (talk)
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