JordanDRobinson

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Your submission at Articles for creation: William Kitchen (Inventor) (March 3)

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Sulfurboy (talk) 18:14, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Kitchen (Inventor) has been accepted

William Kitchen (Inventor), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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Bkissin (talk) 16:13, 6 March 2020 (UTC)

I have sent you a note about a page you started

Hello, JordanDRobinson

Thank you for creating Bill Kitchen (inventor).

User:Doomsdayer520, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:

Thank you for this new article, but note that other editors have wondered if it is an attempted promotion. This concern can be addressed by removing some text about business deals and related matters that are not encyclopedic or not of interest to the general reader.

@Doomsdayer520: Thank You! I would really love to have that tag removed, but I'm not certain what is objectively not of interest to the general reader. The Skyplex items are current, and most people will be following that as construction begins (there's a lot of hype about the world's tallest rollercoaster), I am happy to eliminate any suggestions though providing they don't cut out a key invention or part of William's story. I absolutely prefer this be considered a valid encyclopedia entry vs any sort of promotion. There's plenty of ways to advertise the business, this is more about information. In any case, I appreciate the review, and if I don't hear from you I'll see if I can further recognize what may come across too promotional based on your commentary and Wiki's existing guidelines. Thank you again! (I hope I responded correctly...)JordanDRobinson (talk) 16:03, 4 June 2020 (UTC)

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---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 15:42, 4 June 2020 (UTC)