Johnwho123

Promis

Hi there Johnwho, thanks for the message you sent me yesterday. I have had a look at the article you wrote (here) and it's not too bad. The sources you provide seem to establish notability; that is enough to merit the existence of an article. There are some bits which are too promotional and need to be improved: I suggest using the sources you have (and any more that you can find) to write the history section and only include things that you can source. ItsZippy ^{(talk • contributions)} 19:02, 5 July 2012 (UTC)