User talk:Joedibella7497/sandbox
Peer Review
editI posted a peer review of your entire article on your talk user page. I realized it may have meant a peers sandbox edits (most people aren't editing in there that I have looked at). Since I see you have info here I will post a review of what is in your sandbox. I hope one of these options is correct. Sorry to bother you. Thanks.
-I'm not sure if it is because it is being edited in the sandbox, but there are no citations to back any of the information. -Law Section has some phrasing and grammar issues. There is also a tone of bias I am picking up on that may want to be double checked. Phrasing like "overcome the refugee process" or "There is a ton of legal action taken against refugees." -Asylum Section has some phrasing and grammar issues as well. If those issues were cleaned up the information would be easier to understand. Good information, bad execution.
Partguypartshark (talk) 01:57, 23 February 2017 (UTC)