The citations provided work and are relevant to topic, don't forget to add the ones that are missing. I think the author stayed neutral throughout. Some grammar corrections may be necessary to be able to fully understand and help it flow more. Early history and Art Scene can be combined. I think Art Scene history may be more relevant than early history information.
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