Jjensen18
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:33, 23 October 2019 (UTC)
Peer review
editHi, Jenna! I felt this article itself explains the chronological order of the issue very well. One thing I noticed is that the lead section might be able to more thorough by integrating the political and other responses. This lead section seems to lean only to the legal side of the issue. In terms of sources, I think this article is backed up with resources very well! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chris199012 (talk • contribs) 07:21, 19 November 2019 (UTC)
Wiki Article Peer Review
editJenna, This article does a great job of providing a timeline of the crisis. The timeline is the part that most impressed me. I feel as though you could change the order of some sections. This would improve the flow of the article. I think that also just adding any possible information that is not available on the page would be beneficial. I didn’t really notice anything that overlaps with my article because this is an event whereas I have a product. The lead is comprehensive and straightforward. I also think that the lead should include the fact that a lot of legal fallout has ensued as the rest of the article shows. I think that in terms of the order, the legal cases should be at the very end of the article. Sofia — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sofia--szigethy (talk • contribs) 07:32, 19 November 2019 (UTC)