Jib73

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Stuartyeates (talk) 07:25, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Are you referring to the "Description" section ? I tried to cite as many secondary independent sources in the "History" and "Awards" sections (en.lesassisesdelacybersecurite.com, www.globalsecuritymag.fr) but of course I used the press releases from ESI Group for the information regarding the acquisition of Picviz Labs and the release as open source of the software).

I found two scientific publications that describes some of the software uses-cases :

Scientific publication from the International Journal of Advanced Computer Science and Applications (IJACSA) :

https://thesai.org/Downloads/Volume4No12/Paper_11-The_cybercrime_process_an_overview_of_scientific_challenges_and_methods.pdf

"Recent tools such as Picviz Inspector are able to process large logs files; they can be viewed as pre-analysis tools, able to reduce the initial entropy of possible ways of analyzing."

Thesis of french national gendarmerie officer Éric Freyssinet "Combating botnets: analysis and strategy" (in french) :

https://tel.archives-ouvertes.fr/tel-01274007/document :

"Splunk ou PicViz (qui propose une analyse en coordonnées parallèles), utilisés souvent en complément de ces SIEM, proposent des stratégies à leurs utilisateurs"

I also found the article "Why Simulation Users Should Care About ESI Group’s Open-Source AI" published on engineering.com that describe in details what the software does  :

https://www.engineering.com/story/why-simulation-users-should-care-about-esi-groups-open-source-ai Jib73 (talk) 15:41, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

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Courtesy ping to Stuartyeates. Primefac (talk) 12:30, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

Thank you to Primefac for alerting me to these comments here, I had not previously seen them, sorry about that Jib73. Taking in order:

https://thesai.org/Downloads/Volume4No12/Paper_11-The_cybercrime_process_an_overview_of_scientific_challenges_and_methods.pdf says Recent tools such as Picviz Inspector [37] are able to process large logs files; they can be viewed as preanalysis tools, able to reduce the initial entropy of possible ways of analyzing This is a single sentence about the software and slightly undermined by the word 'Recent' when the article is from 2013.

https://tel.archives-ouvertes.fr/tel-01274007/document is a PhD thesis (a primary source) and again contains a passing mention. Note that we allow non-English sources, they're 100% OK, but if you're going to rely on them to any extent, you're likely to need a French-speaker to approve your draft.

https://www.engineering.com/story/why-simulation-users-should-care-about-esi-groups-open-source-ai does look like a solid source

One article is not enough. Sorry. Stuartyeates (talk) 20:16, 24 September 2022 (UTC)

@Stuartyeates

I found more sources in French language :

https://fr.calameo.com/read/0003873626e67bc608710 (page 8, dating from June 2012).

https://docplayer.fr/651257-Rapport-d-etude-sur-le-big-data.html (page 10, dating from October 2012)

https://soluzen.net/3-eme-articles-deux-nouveaux-appels-doffre-nationaux/ (dating from July 2014)

http://buir.free.fr/archives/pdf/ils420.pdf (page 2, dating from February 2016).

And one other in English language :

https://www.torchsec.org/apache-find-sql-injections-attacks/ (dating from Septembre 2011)

Plus, I do not know if it can count as a source but I have a photo of Thales Group presenting the software to French interior minister Christophe Castaner during the FIC 2020 :

Thales Group presenting INENDI Inspector to French interior minister Chritophe Castaner during the FIC 2020

Jib73 (talk) 10:26, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Hi Jib73. Finding more sources is 100% the correct response here, but I'm pretty much at my limit due to not speaking French. You may wish to post a note at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_France asking for a francophone to review the article. The image is a primary source, so can't be used as a source, but can be used to illustrate the article. Stuartyeates (talk) 19:15, 26 September 2022 (UTC)

Hi @Stuartyeates, I followed your advice and asked for help here : Wikipedia talk:WikiProject France#Request for help from a French speaking reviewer.

In the meantime I've found two more secondary independent french sources from globalsecuritymag.fr :

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/Prix-de-l-Innovation-des-Assises,20120618,30876.html

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/Conference-Orange-Business,20121121,33859.html

And also four more that would probably not considered secondary nor independent :

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/fichiers/hors-serie/GSM11-aR15.pdf

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/Philippe-Saade-Picviz-Inspector,20120712,31355.html

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/Philippe-Saade-Picviz-Labs-vous,20130207,35294.html

https://www.globalsecuritymag.fr/Philippe-Saade-Fondateur-de-Picviz,20130424,36861.html Jib73 (talk) 10:08, 27 September 2022 (UTC)

To be considered, the sources need to be in the article, not here. Good luck with the article. Stuartyeates (talk) 17:44, 27 September 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Inendi Inspector (December 7)

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