User talk:Jdougla6/sandbox

Article Evaluation

Article Review

The article's content is good, however there are some minor grammar errors towards the end of the paragraph. I also didn't see any sources present anywhere near the article. Your facts have to line up with a source. JayKMPix (talk) 22:04, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Hey Jordan. Out of all the topics I can honestly say that your is one of the most interesting! It is rare that people actually discuss what happens to child soldiers, much less African child soldiers. Because this is such a morbid topic it can be easy to find yourself sucked into your opinions and frustrations, however I think you did an excellent job of merely stating facts not opinions. Try to work in more citations and expand on the main points you want to add. Good luck on your topic. Hasani Salaam (talk) 15:33, 10 November 2017 (UTC) Hasani Salaam