Jb1092a

You sound like a powerful woman and just reading your page makes me excited for your future!

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Hello, Jb1092a, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:51, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Welcome!

Hello, Jb1092a, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing.

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Choosing an article to edit Editing an article • Add images to articles Citing sources on Wikipedia
Additional Resources
You can find answers to many student questions on our Q&A site, ask.wikiedu.org

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:23, 16 March 2018 (UTC)

Notes

Hi! I wanted to leave you some notes on your draft:

• The article needs some general editing for tone, as some parts come across as too casual and in some cases uses wording that could be seen as promotional, such as "thirst for knowledge".

• This needs more sourcing - some of this has sourcing from the main page, but you'll also need more sourcing in general since you don't want to rely too heavily on just 1-2 sources.

I hope this helps! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:30, 30 March 2018 (UTC)