User talk:Jasmento/sandbox

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Jguzman06

It's good that you have a lot of information about Charlestown and the information about transportation is important. There is a part where you wrote Housing and it seems to be that it might have its own space, I just think you have to subtitle it. There are a few articles in which you recommend, in my opinion it seems that if you talk more about the main points in those articles, people will actually be interested on knowing more about the subject. The lead section, I'm not sure if it's you're part to fill or you just kept it as draft. But overall everything else seems good. (Jguzman06 (talk) 16:10, 11 April 2016 (UTC))Reply