User talk:Jacque Schauls/Glenn Toby

Explanation: This is my first try at writing an article for Wikipedia and I believe that It now meets all of the guidelines and requirements. If instead of deleting it, you could provide feedback that would enable me to learn to do this properly, I will make the changes right away or you can update it. It is my goal to be creating and updating on this site often so all help is appreciated. Thank you!

Hi there. I moved this back into your userspace so that you can work on it until it meets our policies and guidelines. A good way to improve is to carefully inspect and follow the format/layout of some of our featured articles, use them as an example. A really good instructional page is WP:Writing better articles, if you read it and follow all of the advice I'm sure you will end up with a decent article. If you ever need help with anything just post your question at the Wikipedia:Help desk and someone will respond usually within a couple hours. Good luck! -- œ^™ 07:10, 29 March 2011 (UTC)