For the line, "While some cite the 2009–2010 Iranian election protests and Tunisia’s Jasmine Revolution as examples of the power of online technology to aid social advocacy and protest, other critics doubt its impact," I think we probably want a citation ("some cite" and "other critics"). Did the person who added this have anyone specific in mind?
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