JA's New Camera

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alattis (April 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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-Liance^{talk/contribs} 05:12, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Hello, JA's New Camera! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! -Liancetalk/contribs 05:12, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for declaring your conflict of interest. That doesn't mean you can write what you like, you must follow the guidance below:

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Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 07:55, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Hello,

Thank you for reviewing my page, although I apologize that it did not meet the proper standards. Could you clarify why it was deleted without any ability for input or improvements by me? I believe I put a strong effort into describing my subject neutrally despite my conflict of interest, and I was wondering what in particular I could have done to improve. I have read the Wikipedia policies that were linked by everyone who has reviewed my page, and while I agree that my page fell in a grey area with some, I was wondering why I was not given an opportunity to clarify why I thought my page should not have been deleted. Thank you! JA's New Camera (talk) 08:06, 18 April 2022 (UTC)