User talk:Izzysunbear/sandbox

Guatemala Syphilis Experiment Review

Hi there! Great job on your article so far! I think your sections are really well developed so far - they provide a lot of information about specific cases which is super informative. One thing I think you guys can add is maybe some background/context as to why they were performing these experiments there/why they chose syphilis? And maybe for the "victims" section you could use the word "patients" or something similar. Overall I think you guys are doing great! Sstrou01 (talk) 21:34, 5 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback! Our group carefully considered our word choice for the "victims" section, but we will reconsider again. Thank you for the idea on adding the section about why they chose syphilis to our article - I think it is a great idea!// Great idea adding the why syphilis context! I will see if I can find anything explaining that. (SamiAltman (talk) 03:41, 14 November 2018 (UTC))

Peer Review

I think this is a really well structured and organized article thus far! You did have a bit to go off of from the original article, but I noticed that you added some photos as well as a section for ethical implications. I also appreciate that y'all have left notes for yourselves on what you can continue to develop and elaborate. Continue to work on the article and it will be solid before you know it. Overall, nice work! Rlopez60 (talk) 02:51, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Thank you!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Izzysunbear (talk • contribs) 18:28, 13 November 2018 (UTC) I appreciate the kind comments! We have divided up group responsibilities and are continuing to work on those throughout the quarter.Rileygrace09 (talk) 00:33, 14 November 2018 (UTC)