IversonBLC

Your submission at Articles for creation: Arena of Kings (August 13)

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Ringbang (talk) 01:01, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

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Request on 02:25:38, 13 August 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by ArenaOfKings

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Hi, thanks for reviewing our page so quickly!

We would like to make all necessary changes on our article for approval (if that means reducing the amount of content on the page, so be it). We aren't sure which pieces of content requires sourcing compared to those that don't. Could you inform us on which pieces need to be removed due to invalid sourcing?

Thank you.

ArenaOfKings (talk) 02:25, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

​Hi!

Thanks for making your relationship to the game clear on your talk page. You scored points. For notability, the game must pass the general notability guideline. (Always remember WP:42.) Since the game is in early access, preliminary coverage will probably be insufficient per WP:SUSTAINED (WP:TOOSOON elaborates on this). Once the game has been out long enough to attract some reviews from reputable sources, cite those reviews in the article—even if they have negative things to say. Summarise reviews in a section called "Reception". We don't care if you get bad press, but we do care about how much press you have in total. The way to demonstrate notability is with reliable sources in inline citations, but please don't flood the page with low-quality references—it's counterproductive and it makes us sad.

The guidelines for articles about games are in item 3 of WP:NOTGUIDE (see also WP:NOTPROMO, item 5). The detailed descriptions of character classes should be removed, and the contents of the "Features" section should be a summary of maybe one or two paragraphs. (Write in encyclopedic tone.) The "Spells & Abilities" section and the first paragraph of the "Gameplay" section are the strongest in the article because they describe essential characteristics of the game in neutral language, and have an appropriate level of detail. Good job on those sections.

Good luck with the game,
Ringbang (talk) 03:21, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

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Your draft article, Draft:Arena of Kings

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Dolotta (talk) 03:26, 28 July 2019 (UTC)