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Your submission at Articles for creation: Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan (January 7)

Latest comment: 1 year ago6 comments3 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by TheChunky were:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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❯❯❯ Chunky aka Al Kashmiri (✍️) 12:25, 7 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Good Evening Hong, I've provided additional references, adjusted some pictures, restructured the sub-titles, and added some minor informations (with sources). Hope this helps. DuckieWackie (talk) 15:40, 12 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Good evening, thank you for the edits! I see that you're also in Brunei, was wondering if there's any way we can connect to discuss this as I see you're pretty experienced with Wikipedia. Hope all is well. @Pangalau ItsHong (talk) 16:23, 12 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Messaging my email duckiewackie780@gmail.com or leaving a message at my talk page could help elaborate further. DuckieWackie (talk) 01:58, 13 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Ahh ok nice. ItsHong (talk) 06:19, 13 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hello, ItsHong! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ❯❯❯ Chunky aka Al Kashmiri (✍️) 12:25, 7 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan (November 1)

Latest comment: 11 months ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by GraziePrego were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Generally good, but some rewriting needed. Some of the sentences are a bit flowery and promotional. Also needs more citations, especially for the more recent history. Plenty of statements there with no citations to support them.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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GraziePrego (talk) 01:08, 1 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the comments, will improve them and resubmit soon. ItsHong (talk) 07:11, 1 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan. Thanks! asilvering (talk) 20:30, 1 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan (November 8)

Latest comment: 11 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

This submission appears to be taken from https://chms.edu.bn/en/?page_id=465. Wikipedia cannot accept material copied from elsewhere, unless it explicitly and verifiably has been released to the world under a suitably free and compatible copyright license or into the public domain and is written in an acceptable tone—this includes material that you own the copyright to. You should attribute the content of a draft to outside sources, using citations, but copying and pasting or closely paraphrasing sources is not acceptable. The entire draft should be written using your own words and structure.

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Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 05:36, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan. Thanks! Ca ^{talk to me!} 10:27, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chung Hwa Middle School, Bandar Seri Begawan (November 8)

Latest comment: 22 days ago4 comments3 people in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

An entire paragragh Fridays were declared a weekend holiday and the school syllabus was changed in 1974, in line with the national policy and syllabus wherein English and Malay were taught in primary school. After 1975, the medium of instruction in the school was officially changed to English with the exception of Mandarin Chinese, Bahasa Melayu (Malay), Sejarah (history), music, physical education, art, and moral or civic education. In the same year, government-assigned teachers were brought in to teach Bahasa Melayu (Malay) in the primary level, with their salaries shouldered by the government. In 1976, Year 11 or Form 5 students sat for the GCE Ordinary Level exams (O-Level) for the first time instead of internal exams set by the school. The same year, Year 6 or Primary 6 students were also selected based on Malay and English proficiency to sit for the Primary Certificate of Education (PCE) exams. The next year, students sitting for the PCE and the Brunei Junior Certificate of Education (BJCE) exams achieved record results. only to be backed up by one Blogspot link. Please use reliable sources.

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 13:56, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

Ok thank you for the feedback, though is there any other issues you could find before I edit it and resubmit? Sorry for the trouble and thanks for the feedback. ItsHong (talk) 18:46, 8 November 2023 (UTC)Reply

It will take awhile until a volunteer reviews your draft. Therefore, I do suggest you work on something else in the mean time. Pangalau (talk) 01:09, 26 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

The article has been approved and published. Thank you, for your work. Pangalau (talk) 04:09, 6 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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