User talk:Irena Djordjevic/sandbox

Latest comment: 7 years ago by Bapithra

I really like your article. You did an excellent job researching your fungus. But here are some suggestions:

  • I felt that the information you provided in the Taxonomy section is repetitive of what you stated in the history section.
  • In the Growth and Morphology section, you mention 3 developmental pathways, it will be helpful if you can explain the situation in which one pathway is selected over the other.
  • Growth and Morphology— you should organize it more. You can talk about growth, hyphae and then reproduction. (You would probably do this when you edit it)
  • If you want you can have a separate Reproduction section, since you have a lot of information regarding it.
  • Physiology—there are certain points in this section that fits better in Reproduction or growth and morphology section.
  • If you can find information on pathology in mosquitoes and other animals, you can add that.

Hope these suggestions are helpful. Again, you did an excellent job on your article! Bapithra (talk) 00:03, 29 October 2016 (UTC)Reply