Imwhited
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Imwhited,
The article itself already seems to have a decent amount of information, however, I think it could really benefit from some TLC! Maybe you could try expanding upon the existing material? I didn't see any outlined subject headings/material in your sandbox, so here are some ideas I had from reading what already exists in the article:
Fertility Imagery edit
Eroticism in Ancient Rome edit
Characteristics of Erotic Art edit
Those might help!
You could also really look into where these kinds of statues where often displayed, the article is really missing that element. You might also want to explore who the well known sculptors of this kind of art were.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:10, 22 September 2017 (UTC)