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Some of your contributions appear to be intended as advertising for the Hult business school. Please note that Wikipedia is not a platform for advertising or promotion; as stated above, articles must be written from a neutral point of view and they must be verifiable. I have already reverted some of your additions that are advertising or express a nonneutral point of view; I intend to make additional changes when I have more time to devote to the matter.
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Again, welcome! Orlady (talk) 16:24, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
Replies to your questions
editHi. These are quick replies to two questions you asked on my talk page. (I have not had time to take a look at the article again.)
You asked: Also can you please advise why it still says at the top of the page that citations are needed even though I have rectified citations from the previous page.
- Answer: That's a cleanup template that will need to be removed manually after someone unrelated to Hult reviews the article.
You asked: Additionally, can you please advise why it is not possible to write "top-ranked" international business school even though a) I have cited the rankings and b) other pages i.e. London Business School has written "leading international business school"?
- Answer: An article lead section should present a short summary of the key elements of the article topic. The first sentence, in particular, should be objective -- and things like rankings are inherently subjective. As a general rule, when trying to figure out what's acceptable in Wikipedia, it's best to look at Wikipedia policies and guidelines and not other articles (see WP:OTHERSTUFF for a discussion related to this -- but not specifically on this topic). If London Business School's lead sentence calls it a "leading international business school", then it seems to me that the London School article needs to be fixed -- not emulated. On the other hand, Harvard University does not contain any superlative adjectives in the lead sentence. --Orlady (talk) 17:32, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. Drmies (talk) 20:26, 19 November 2009 (UTC)