Heylee dooley
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:35, 6 February 2019 (UTC)
Response to Peer Review edit
Heylee I found most of your comments fair and completely accurate. I only have one point to defend against what you had suggested. You said that I could use longer sources, I think you misunderstood the page numbers next to my citations only indicates how many pages of my sources I had read through and pulled information from in reality I have sources that are 30 and 40 pages long. As for a lead section I am keeping the lead section the article already has since I am editing this article and not starting from scratch. I will try and add more to the legality section as well as the history section but the history section will be much larger as there is much more information for this section. I appreciate the suggestion to try and round out the information from the Ming Dynasty and I will it is just a bit trickier to find reliable information on this topic regarding that time period and further back. I will also try to add to the demographics section but over all the history section is going to be the biggest of my concerns, I think this is okay because some sections just have more information concerning them then others so as long as all sections are evenly filled out then I think the actual length isn't as important as the fullness of the information presented. Thank you for your helpful input AnniePJordan (talk) 04:19, 6 March 2019 (UTC)AnniePJordanAnniePJordan (talk) 04:19, 6 March 2019 (UTC)