Harwant Singh Arora

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Yash Wadali. Thanks! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 22:21, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Yash Wadali. Thanks! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 22:23, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yash Wadali (April 25)

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Yash Wadali. Thanks! '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talk|contribs) 07:43, 2 May 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Yash Wadali (May 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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CNMall41 (talk) 20:05, 7 May 2024 (UTC)

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Thank you for declaring your conflict of interest. That doesn't mean you can write what you like, you must follow the guidance below:

When you write about a person

• you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the music notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.

• Many of your supposed sources are just links to his music, not independent third-party sources (discograhies don't need refs), one is just a link to YouTube, and you have multiple identical references (don't do that, give the ref a name) to Urban Asian which is a fan page and quoting him, global Prime doesn't mention him. One is selling tickets.
• your text tells us nothing to suggest he meets our mjusic notability criteria, as linked above such as awards, chart placings, major tours and the like. Who trained him and who he worked with are immaterial, notability isn't transferable.

• You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.

• If you think what you wrote was neutral and factual, I dread to think what you consider spam looks like. Yash's creative magic and tremendous talent... His supreme confidence, newness in his demeanor and knack for his singing has solidified made his status as India's brand new singing sensation. just pure spam, and most of the rest is fan-page stuff

• There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
• You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

• Much of your text is copied from your "sources" eg Urban Asian Copyright © 2024 Urban Asian Inc. All Rights Reserved.
• Your image was a copyright violation too Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Hi Jim,

Thank you for sharing your valuable feedback. I followed the "Waluscha De Sousa" template and guidelines and published my article.

Thank you. Harwant Singh Arora (talk) 15:40, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Because you declared your COI, I didn't block you despite blatant spamming. If your next attempt is anything like the first, you won't get off again. Also, don't have multiple copies of your text, and don't move a draft to article space without submitting it for review, that's not permitted for COI editors Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)