Hi! I was also given an assignment to engage with the talk page of this article and draft 3 paragraphs that might improve the page. The research I've been doing belongs under the Nutrition section, and I've proposed two new subheadings: "Overweight and Obesity" and "Chronic Illness." Food deserts are highly correlated with both of these outcomes but this research has not been presented much in the article. If you'd like to review my sandbox, all three paragraphs are listed there. Please note that my assignment does not require that I post the information into the livespace but I do welcome any feedback. Thanks!