Friuliveneto
Joined 2 June 2006
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Friuliveneto in topic July 2022
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July 2022 edit
Hello, I'm Bishonen. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Book of Mormon seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Bishonen | tålk 19:31, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
- My edit was reversed as not being neutral. The sentence I fixed was: "The Book of Mormon is divided into smaller books, titled after individuals named as primary authors or other caretakers of the ancient record the Book of Mormon describes itself as and, in most versions, is divided into chapters and verses." I deleted "describes itself as and," which makes no sense. I'm not sure how that bewrays a non-neutral position except in my disdain for ungrammatical phrasing. Friuliveneto (talk) 21:16, 14 July 2022 (UTC)