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editHello, Forcommclass, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:40, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
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editNice work on your article draft. I do have a few thoughts on how you might improve your draft. I noticed that you have used the same reference several times, and in each case you have created a separate reference. Instead of doing this, I would recommend you use named references (as explained here in the student training) to reduce duplication.
You have also used Cara's website as a source. While this might be a perfectly good source, it's one that is under the control of the subject of the article. Reliable sources should be independent of the subject of the article - while that doesn't mean that you can't use Cara's website at all, you should not rely on it too heavily. Instead, you should try to find independent sources that support this material. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:11, 20 October 2015 (UTC)