Advertising language edit

"extremely space and cost efficient mechanised parking system...." "builds upward instead of sidewards to free up valuable land spaces...." "it is the ideal mechanised parking system to increase parking capacity" - that's the kind of language that gets an article (especially one with no third-party sources) killed. --Orange Mike | Talk 17:22, 30 October 2008 (UTC) married to ParkingPrincessReply