User talk:Farrar80/sandbox
Establishing Definition edit
I have begun to work through the definition of the genre. I have added some of the big guns in terms of generic establishment and defining. Where to draw the line in terms of definition is proving difficult (esp. since the def on the revenge play page is so truncated). There are still some things I need to add here under definition, specifically about Seneca, possibly Boccaccio and the de casibus tradition, and the generic conventions of revenge tragedy. Farrar80 (talk) 23:48, 1 June 2015 (UTC)
Danielle, this is a great start. You do a good job of explaining the nuances of a genre that has a complicated definition and citing the major scholarly contributions to its articulation. You might revise/reword or cite some of the more evaluative statements, like "is often considered" and "typically classified." By whom? Can you name some specific scholars who have stated this, even if they are not the only ones? If this gets to be too long, you might create separate sections for the definition and scholarly discussions of what works constitute a revenge tragedy. I'm excited to see how this turns out - you are definitely filling a significant gap in early modern literature on Wikipedia. RachLit (talk) 19:54, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
Danielle, I second Rachel's observations. It looks good and reads very scholarly. I didn't find any thing that I would change. Great Work! Dlaitinen (talk) 21:07, 3 June 2015 (UTC)
June 5-When you say "introduced" in the opening paragraph do you mean he coined the name for the genre? I think it's a worthwhile clarification. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dlaitinen (talk • contribs) 17:24, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
Thanks, Dana. I agree that the verb could be more concise. But I'm having a difficult time figuring out how to say it with more formal diction. I was considering "invented," "named," and some verbs like that. I hesitate to use something like "created" or "innovated" because that suggests something different. Farrar80 (talk) 18:19, 5 June 2015 (UTC)