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Week2/ Assignment 2/ Beccabubu
- The article I assign is “communication studies”. Good communication skills are essential to allow others and yourself to understand information more accurately and quickly, so I find it is interesting to learn more about this area.
- There are some issues with this article, so I made some adjustment advice below: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Beccabubu/Evaluate_an_Article
- I think the whole process of evaluating a Wikipedia article is fun and challenging; it gives value to my knowledge and helps me learn about new things. --Beccabubu (talk) 13:53, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Gdaymate011
Hello, this is Kai Wu's third assignment 1: My copyedited article is the "Opium War".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Opium_Wars.
2: I have added one paragraph regarding the history of the opium war in order to make the article looks more detailed. this is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Opium_Wars&type=revision&diff=1051895188&oldid=1050470888.
3: The reason I am doing this article is that I'm very interested in history. Therefore, I hope to make this historical article more complete through my own contribution. Through my reading of this article, I found that many parts are not quite complete. I added some historical background at the beginning, hoping to make the article more detailed.
4: The link for the article "the Opium War" bibliography:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gdaymate011/Opium_Wars/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography Gdaymate011 (talk) 06:22, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
- Gdaymate011, Nice work. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 01:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 1/assignment 1/huilin826
This is huilin, this is my first time using Wikipedia and editing it. It will be hard for me, but I will try my best. Huilin826 (talk) 07:04, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Notkc01
Hi everyone, This is Kyle. Hope everyone is having a good week. Here is my Week2 assignment.
1. The article is about physical fitness and it gives people with any level of fitness knowledge with a general idea of the fitness world.
2. The link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Physical_fitness#High_intensity_interval_training
3. The article made a good general introduction for physical fitness but I found that each training category was only described by one sentence. For some categories, the information is not accurate and can be revised. Here is my evaluation link for the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Evaluate_an_Article Notkc01 (talk) 13:15, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
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Week2-Assignment 2 - Amber MWY
Hello, everyone, this is Amber. 1. I found an article that talked about the Chinese language, but its timeline is not very clear. The 1950s is very important for the revolution of the Chinese. so I edited it be highlighted in bold. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_language 3. A good article should have very clear. A good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:59, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
- Amber MWY, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. --- FULBERT (talk) 23:44, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, Hi professor, I did it but I do not know why it did not show that https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article--Amber MWY (talk) 11:45, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, Hi professor, I found this page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article. Please check it, Thank you.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:01, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
- Amber MWY, OK, now answer some of the questions for the evaluation itself. It asks you questions on the top of the page so answer some of them on the bottom. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:47, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT,Dear Professor, I answered it again. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article Thank you!--Amber MWY (talk) 15:04, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
- Amber MWY, OK, now answer some of the questions for the evaluation itself. It asks you questions on the top of the page so answer some of them on the bottom. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 13:47, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, Hi professor, I found this page. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Evaluate_an_Article. Please check it, Thank you.--Amber MWY (talk) 14:01, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Fourth Post / bl2240
Hi All,
1. This week I was working on the article the same as last one, which is "Asian Hip Pop". There was citation missing in 1990's Chinese hip pop on a very important person in the music history of modern China, Cui Jian. I added the reference, which was a journal written by Andreas Steen on Chinese pop music.
2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Asian_hip_hop&type=revision&diff=1052462043&oldid=1038493053
3. I learn that citation is vital in a published article since it establishes the credibility of the article, especially when it comes to historical events we should pay extra attention to using the references from credible sources. --Bl2240 (talk) 08:33, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2/Assignment2/Jw6740
1. I found an article about electronic business which is related to the topic of my research paper. After reviewing the article, I found it still has room to improve such as the lack of images and references, the content also can be improved as well. 2. Here is the link to my article evaluation: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Evaluate_an_Article 3. What I learned from this process is the importance of the peer view of any article that will be published for others to look at. With more evaluations, the article can be improved to a more accurate level. Jw6740 (talk) 15:10, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Nenenie
1. I added a citation about the commentary to the novel. It roughly describes the social and historical background reflected in the story and thus brings changes to the protagonist, making a protagonist with clear thoughts persecuted and assimilated due to social decay. It was also a chilling instance of the era.
2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added.
3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance the persuasions and make the language more authoritative and powerful. At the same time, it also increases readers' clearer and deeper understanding of the article. --Nenenie (talk) 22:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3/ Assignment 3/ Notkc01
Hi, this is Kyle.
1: The article I copyedited is "Plyometrics". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Plyometrics
2: I have some grammar mistakes in the article to help improve the readability. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Plyometrics&diff=1052448972&oldid=1034084692
3: The reason I am doing this article is that I go to the gym regularly and I have tried different training methods and menus. Plyometrics is definitely one of the essential movements that one needs to add to his or her workout routine if he or she wants to pursue higher athleticism.
4: The link for the article "Plyometrics" bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Plyometrics/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 06:32, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Notkc01
Hi guys, this is Kyle.
1. The article I assigned is "split jump". The link to the article：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Split_jump_(exercise)
2. This article is very short and there is no citation on it. In order to make people who want to have a deeper understanding of this exercise and its pros and cons, I feel like I need to add some citations. I added one sentence to the article to help elaborate the usage of a certain type of exercise and I also cited a journal article to help increase the credibility. Here is the diff-link of my revision: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Split_jump_(exercise)&diff=1052457297&oldid=744899863
3. Here is the assigned link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Notkc01/Split_jump_(exercise)/Bibliography Notkc01 (talk) 07:41, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3/ Copyedit an Article/ SABA90S
I have chosen an article relevant to the travel business as I am passionate about this topic. I have read this article and went through it to see if there are any mistakes. However, it was hard for me to try to find something in a professional article at the beginning. I have realized a couple of pronunciation and grammar mistakes. I edited and modified all of the mistakes I found and published the changes. Here is the article link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships
And also my bibliography page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SABA90S/COVID-19_pandemic_on_cruise_ships/Bibliography. --SABA90S (talk) 14:27, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
- SABA90S, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:03, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
FULBERT, Please see the below link of the diff. --SABA90S (talk) 18:03, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
- SABA90S, I am not sure how you got the coding around your reply, though next time please just use " : " with replies. This is fine, though did you see the change that was then done with your edits? It is fine for this week (current with Week 3) though Wikipedia articles maintain either British or American English within an article, however it was initially written, for consistency. Good enough for now. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:46, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 2/ Second Post / bh2278
1.The article that I choose was "Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the food industry". This is currently a level C article and needs many improvements. The classification of countries could be more organized. The data and the situation of many countries can be improved. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BaixinH/Evaluate_an_Article 3. I learned that to write a good article, many factors need to be considered, including content, typesetting, structure and neutral of the article, which will affect the quality of the article.BaixinH (talk) 19:27, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3/ Assignment 3/ bh2278
1. My copyedited article is the "Sina Weibo".this is the link to my assigned article:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sina_Weibo 2. I correct and error and add the current situation of some company.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sina_Weibo&type=revision&diff=1052620283&oldid=1049343540 3. The lesson I learned is that Wiki is a free and public knowledge platform, we should be careful when we read and edit it. It is our responsibility to take care of the content we write. So I need to check the information through many resource.BaixinH (talk) 06:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 2/ Assignment 2/ Cecilia haha
1. This article describes the disruption of shipping routes caused by the pandemic among shipping companies worldwide. I added the effect section in the 2021 Global Supply Chain Crisis.
2.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article
3. In this process, I have gained more directions and a deeper understanding of the part I researched, and at the same time, I can help others understand the influence of the Supply Chain in this process.--Cecilia haha (talk) 20:16, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, I see that you created your review page, though I do not see you answering any of the questions you have there. Please answer some of them as part of your review and then ping me here and I will come and review them. FULBERT (talk) 11:00, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I answered the questions. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F Please look at it. Thank you!Cecilia haha (talk) 22:21, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha Where did you answer the questions asked from the top of that page? For example, did you answer the questions, "Is the article neutral?" or "Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?" --- FULBERT (talk) 23:28, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I answered the questions. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F Please look at it. Thank you!Cecilia haha (talk) 22:21, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- I am sorry about that! I rewrite the evalutation and here is my update.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_articleCecilia haha (talk) 00:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I added the colon: before each level--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, Great! Week 2 is current. FULBERT (talk) 16:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I added the colon: before each level--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:20, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 01:29, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- I am sorry about that! I rewrite the evalutation and here is my update.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Evaluate_an_Article#Evaluate_the_articleCecilia haha (talk) 00:13, 25 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3/ Third Post/ Cecilia haha
1. I copyedited Jack Ma's wiki. Here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_Ma
2. The link after i edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cecilia_haha/Jack_Ma/Bibliography
I edited two sentences in Jack Ma's biliography. 1)"In April 2021, Jack Ma ranked 26th in the "2021 Forbes Global Rich List" with a fortune of US$48.4 billion." 2) "In August 2014, according to the Bloomberg Billionaires Index, Jack Ma has a net worth of US$21.8 billion, making him the richest man in China."
3. Since I changed the bibliography, I need to go to the official website to ensure his information is correct and reliable. Although Jack Ma is a very famous person, I found that Wikipedia still had some omissions when I searched for his life records. I discovered that although Wikipedia has records for many things or people, the records are not very comprehensive.Cecilia haha (talk) 23:32, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jack_Ma&diff=prev&oldid=1051675767 I edited the article two times, so it look similiary sometimes.--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:23, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, Great. This is now fine. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 16:02, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT, here is the link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jack_Ma&diff=prev&oldid=1051675767 I edited the article two times, so it look similiary sometimes.--Cecilia haha (talk) 03:23, 27 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 2/Assignment/Chenjshi
Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi (yuqiong)’s assignment 2. 1. The article I assigned is QR code payment, and this is a way of mobile payment. The topic of my article is the discussion about mobile payments, and they are related. 2. In my opinion, some mobile payment applications can be added to the article, not only in transportation, such as in daily life and store payment. We can use mobile payment to buy goods in the supermarket, and merchants can also provide a QR code for the payment. (Venmo, Quick pay and Zella). 3. This is link to the article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/QR_code_paymentChenjshi (talk) 02:48, 25 October 2021 (UTC) 4. This is the link of evaluation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chenjshi/Evaluate_an_ArticleChenjshi (talk) 01:22, 29 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi(talk)
Week1/ Assignment-introduction/ Emilyyxx
Hi, this is Emily. It is also my first time editing on Wikipedia. I used to get on Wikipedia to learn materials quite often, and feel excited to actually have an account here.--Emilyyxx (talk) 02:36, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2/ Assignment-Article Evaluation/ Emilyyxx
1. I chose the topic I am interested in and evaluate the article by assessing the contents and the lead by determining whether they have enough reliable resources, if they are structured or not, if the information is clear enough to allow readers find what they are searching for, and whether the contents are well organized.
2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyyxx/Evaluate_an_Article
3. Before working on the Wikipedia pages or when I was only a reader, I never tried to evaluate the contents on Wikipedia, so I often assumed the information are trustful, even though I know it is edited by the public. However, after I went through the Talk Page, I understand that the editors sometimes have different thoughts and have problems with the contents and the references are sometimes not so reliable. Therefore, looking up information on Wikipedia required a careful review. --Emilyyxx (talk) 05:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3/ Assignment-Copyedit an Article/ Emilyyxx
1. [Samoyed] is my favorite dog kind, so I decided to work on it.
2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Samoyed_dog&type=revision&diff=1052454840&oldid=1052109728
3. While I was making the minor change, I was also able to review other people's editing history. Although the article is not too long, a large number of minor changes are contributed by many people. It is probably the power of Wikipedia that everyone can make a tiny step and finally complete better organized and informative article to help readers understand the different contents. --Emilyyxx (talk) 07:24, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4 / assignment 4/ sunnydayreading
Hi,
I added two citations for Amazon about its environmental pledge under the Environmental impact section. The information under the Environmental impact section contains both positive movements and negative incidents. However, there is not enough information about the environmental pledge. Therefore, I added some statistics, the number of signatories and industries among the world,to make it more detailed. I learned the importance of citations. Citation allows us to incorporate others’ ideas and gives credit to the author. Also, it is important to check whether the citation is the latest. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Amazon_(company)&diff=1052461764&oldid=1052417836
Sunnydayreading (talk) 08:43, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
- Sunnydayreading, Nice addition of the source. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:11, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4/ Assignment-Citation/ Emilyyxx
1. Baotou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for its nickname. The cited source is an encyclopedia website about Baotou introducing the city.
2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Baotou&type=revision&diff=1052467786&oldid=1050938784
3. Although citation can be added by one simple click, the research process can be time-consuming. Secondary sources are normally proper for Wikipedia editing since we want to avoid original research. --Emilyyxx (talk) 09:40, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2 / assignment 2/ sunnydayreading
Good evening,
I have done my first article evaluation and posted it to the sandbox. Here is the link to the sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sunnydayreading/Evaluate_an_Article#Why_you_have_chosen_this_article_to_evaluate%3F
Best,
Sunnydayreading (talk) 05:06, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
- Sunnydayreading, Nice article evaluation. You are current for Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3 / assignment 3/ sunnydayreading
Hi,
I copyedited Uniqlo for the assignment of this week. Because the information about the existing operating number of store is lagging. So, I made changes based on the report of Uniqlo. I modified the of number of stores in Austria, Korea, China, Uk, USA, France, Spain and Philippines. In the beginning, I did not check my work before submission. However, I found several typo from myself. Therefore, I went back to the edit page and made change. For the next time, I will double check it before any submission.
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uniqlo&diff=prev&oldid=1052456267
Sincerely
Sunnydayreading (talk) 07:49, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
- Sunnydayreading Nice edit on this. Week 3 is current. --- FULBERT (talk) 16:14, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4 / assignment 4/ bh2278
1. This week I was working on the article talk about Tencent. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tencent. It tells the specific location of Tencent and doesn't provide a reference. So I add the Tencent Annual Report from the Hong Kong Exchanges and Clearing Limited.
2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tencent&type=revision&diff=1052626028&oldid=1052574928
3. I learn that the editor needs to be careful about every sentence he writes. Every sentence or fact need a reference to support it.BaixinH (talk) 06:52, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 2/assignment 2/Huilin826
The article is the Australian Jazz Museum was held at the Whitehorse Hotel, Melbourne, in August 1996. It is also accredited by the national film and sound archive of Australia as being part of the national material, Australian Jazz Museum is open to the public on Tuesday and Friday. It is a sign of Australian Jazz, creating more platforms for jazz music. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Australian_Jazz_Museum
Week 1/ Assignment 1/ Tzc0725
Tzc0725 (talk) 22:34, 26 October 2021 (UTC) What I Did and What I Learned
This week I have created a Wikipedia Account by going to the homepage of Wikipedia and clicking ‘Create account’ in the homepage’s top right. After that, I have entered all the necessary personal information, including my preferable username and a strong 10-digit alphanumeric password, and clicked the "Create your account" tab to create an account on Wikipedia. From this, I have learned how to create a personal account on a digital platform to interact with people across the world through data and information.
68.132.244.48 (talk) 00:19, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Tzc0725 (talk • contribs) 22:32, 26 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Cecilia haha
1. I added the legend story on the Chinese New Year's red envelopes section to make the origination clearer and more attractive.
2. Here is the difference link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Chinese_New_Year&type=revision&diff=1052587919&oldid=1052491602
3. I think it is essential to keep the information comprehensive. I believe the professionalism of the article and citation are equally important. Citation can prevent plagiarism. If people are interested in a relevant article, they can check the reference and do more readings. --Cecilia haha (talk) 01:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cecilia haha, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE" as this source does not seem credible to me. However, another editor has already gone in and edited this one so I will leave it for now. Please focus on more credible sources in the future. Ok for now for Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 16:05, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT Thank you! I will be more careful about the article authority. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cecilia haha (talk • contribs) 16:53, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3/Assignment3/Jw6740
1. The article I assigned is Targeted advertising since I am interested in marketing strategies that can effectively attract more customers. The link to the bibliography: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Targeted_advertising/Bibliography
2. Here is the link to the diff I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Targeted_advertising&diff=prev&oldid=1052697316
3. From this assignment, I learned how the wiki article can be edited and contributed by the wiki users. This is my first time editing the wiki and I corrected some grammar and word spelling issues for the article. I am looking forward to editing more in the future. Jw6740 (talk) 17:12, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4/Assignment4/Jw6740
1. The article I assigned is "domestic trades". The article is short and only has two references. Therefore, I added a reference with a sentence under the "importance and Role" section to state one of the benefits that domestic trades have compared to international trades.
2. Here is the line to the differences I made: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Domestic_trade&diff=prev&oldid=1052715166
The link to the bibliography is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jw6740/Domestic_trade/Bibliography
3. What I learned from this assignment is how to add or reuse a citation in the wiki articles, and how we can add the reference and the templates at the end of the article. Besides, I also learned the article on the wiki may be lack supportive references and can be improved as well. Jw6740 (talk) 18:41, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
week3/assignment 3/ Amber MWY
1. This is my added article: New energy vehicles https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_energy_vehicles_in_China. I added the article brief and three citations. 2. There are two links about the bibliography and article draft https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/New_energy_vehicles_in_China/Bibliography 3. It is a very interesting thing to read an article and edit it. I learned about the importance of citation and a clear brief. It can show the summary of the article to the reader very clearly and necessarily.--Amber MWY (talk) 07:00, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
week4/assignment 4/ Amber MWY
1. I assigned an article"Environmental impacts of lithium-ion batteries" and I added a citation to support the "This type of battery is also referred to as lithium-ion batteries. " 2. a link to the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries&type=revision&diff=1052829465&oldid=1052659979. This is a link for the bibliography https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Amber_MWY/Environmental_impacts_of_lithium-ion_batteries/Bibliography 3. when we write an article, we can not write an extreme sentence. we need to give evidence to support it.--Amber MWY (talk) 09:57, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3/ Assignment 3/ Beccabubu
1. The article I chose to edit is "Meituan(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meituan)", it is cheaper to have food delivered than to get it yourself, in China Meituan is an APP known for food delivery service. Personally, I order two or three meals in Meituan a week. So I really want to know more about this app.
2. There are a few grammar mistakes in this article so I made some adjustments. Besides, to generate rich content, I add a section called "Main assets" of Meituan to make the whole content more informative. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meituan&diff=1052835986&oldid=1049221122
3. Though all the source of knowledge and information shared on Wikipedia is not true, but if you try to identify content gaps and tell what is wrong and right, you can easily make a difference. --Beccabubu (talk) 11:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4/ Assignment 4/ Beccabubu
1. The article I chose to add the citation is "Tongling" (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tongling). Tongling is the city where I was born, it is a small city in China that barely has any information to introduce it on Wikipedia. So I add the citation of the definition from Encyclopædia Britannica.
2. link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tongling&diff=1052843263&oldid=1051101012
3. Citation is extremely important, a proper citation will allow a reader go back and refer to the original source as they deem appropriate. --Beccabubu (talk) 12:36, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2/ Assignment2/ Cloi929
As Covid-19 spreads across the United States, the number and duration of school closures increase. Children from families that depend on school food, may be further disadvantaged by insufficient nutrition. And I learned, even short-term food insecurity can lead to long-term developmental, psychological, physical, and emotional damage.Cloi929 (talk) 04:57, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cloi929, Please complete the article evaluation per the instructions and steps in the Evaluate Wikipedia training assignment and then ping me here when it is done. You will then have a link to your evaluation on your own sandbox page. FULBERT (talk) 01:31, 22 October 2021 (UTC)
1.https://www.nejm.org/doi/full/10.1056/nejmp2005638 2.Child hunger has been one of the major health problems in various parts of the world. With the emergence of the Covid-19 pandemic, the problem increased severity as more members of the society suffered the blow. My initial impression of this article is that the pandemic is a very uncertain factor. When schools are closed, children will miss at least $30 worth of food services every week. This has a long-term effect on their health. 3.This article was published in a medical academic journal. It is authoritative and credible. I think everything is related to the topic of the article. The tone is neutral. The citations are all valid. I think there will be some lag in information. It is mentioned in the article that all schools are closed and students will not receive school food subsidies. The current situation is that most schools are back to normal, and students can eat at school. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cloi929/Evaluate_an_Article--Cloi929 (talk) 01:00, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cloi929, Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:16, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- Cloi929, This is now fine, though please do this as a reply to me after my comment. OK for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Assignment 4/ Gdaymate011
Hello, this is Kai Wu's fourth Assignment Report.
1. The article I assigned to the weekly assignment is about my hometown "Qingdao City", this is the article link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Qingdao. The citation I made is about the Qingdao University ranking detail because I think the university of each city can represent the culture of a city. therefore, I would like to make some contribution to this article.
2. This is the link to my diff of what I have edited: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Qingdao&type=revision&diff=1052771893&oldid=1051581128
3. What I learned from this assignment is the use of citation is to enrich the content of the article and make it more credible. Gdaymate011 (talk) 01:16, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Gdaymate011, Great edit. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:39, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4 / assignment 4/ Jjjjdddd199704
1. I cite a description of his wealth, and his main wealth accumulation industry from the forbe website on the Zhong Shanshan wiki profile.
2. This is the link to the citation difference I added. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Zhong_Shanshan&diff=1052549943&oldid=1052549664
3. From this task, I found that adding citations can enhance persuasiveness and let us understand a person more comprehensively.Jjjjdddd199704 (talk) 20:45, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
- Jjjjdddd199704, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:22, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- FULBERT,Dear professor I assigned the article already nowJjjjdddd199704 (talk) 01:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Jjjjdddd199704, Please remember to indent your replies with one colon " : " for each level of indent you want, as this helps with readability. OK for this time. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 1/ Assignment 1 / Baezoey
Hello everyone! This is Baezoey! It is my first time creating a Wikipedia account and learn how to edit articles. There are some many instructions there and I am trying to follow all of them. Hope my editing can help others to better knowing something finallyBaezoey (talk) 02:46, 31 October 2021 (UTC).
Week 2/ Assignment 2 / Baezoey
I chosed an article from my interested area, which is eSports, to evaluate. For my evaluation, I found that this article is not up to date, and it only shows content till 2019. I also noticed that this article cited many content from the social media account.
Here is the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Baezoey/Evaluate_an_Article
I learned that even Wikipedia, the largest encyclopedia website, has content that is not updated in time. As users of Wikipedia, we should not only be recipients, but also editors.Baezoey (talk) 06:59, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4/ Assignment 4 / Baezoey
1. Uzi is one of my favorite professional eSports player of League of Legends. He officially retired from professional play in 2020 so I add a citation for the date he announced his retirement. The source I use is ESPN, which is a famous multinational sports channel in America. Link to article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Uzi_(gamer)
2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Uzi_(gamer)&diff=1052821638&oldid=1049552180
3. Citation is the best way for people interested in the content of a Wikipedia article and wants to go deeper into it. It also proves that what we added to the article is backed by reliable sources instead of something we come up with by ourselves.Baezoey (talk) 08:35, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
week 3/Assignment 3/Chenjshi
Hello everyone, this is Chenjshi(Yuqiong), 1. The article I copyedited is "Datong". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datong 2. I modified the usage of some punctuation and words. This is my diff link: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Datong&type=revision&diff=1052810290&oldid=1045272826 3. I modified the usage of some punctuation marks and words, which is more helpful for people to understand the article. Datong is my hometown. I hope that more and more people will know about this city and improve the content of Wikipedia. Everyone will make some positive changes to the article, which will make the content of Wikipedia more and more reliable.Chenjshi (talk) 06:19, 31 October 2021 (UTC)Chenjshi
Week 4/Assignment 4/Chenjshi
1. I added a citation about the history of bed bath&beyond. It provides us with more information about bed bath&beyond so that we can clearly understand the achievements of bed bath&beyond.
2. Here is the link to the diff of what citation I added https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Bed_Bath_%26_Beyond&type=revision&diff=1052838003&oldid=1052837431
3. From this task, I learned how to use citations. Using citations can make the article more authentic. At the same time, the correct use of citations can also make the article more convincing.Chenjshi (talk) 09:28, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week1 / Assignment1 / Damonmand
Hi, everyone, it is my first time to use wikipedia, and I learn a lot from how to use the sandbox and check the watchlist. I am so exciting to work with my classmate here. Damonmand (talk) 04:14, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2 / Assignment2 / Damonmand
1. Hello guys, here is Zaimeng's second post. The article that I pick is "League of Legends Pro League" and it is currently a level C article so it has a lot of improvement space. Since esport is the new industry, the information about it still lacking a lot. This article did not mention the relationship between the leagues from all over the world. Also the citation still need to be added more.
3. I learned that even in Wikipedia, many articles still need to be keep evaluated even it already be posted. People who read these articles will get more completely information.Damonmand (talk) 06:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3 / Assignment3 / Damonmand
Hi, guys, this is the third post for Zaimeng Xiao.
1: The article I copyedited is "The International 2019". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_International_2019
2: I have some regarding a sentence in the article to help it easier to understanded. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_International_2019&type=revision&diff=1052817359&oldid=1051555243
3: The reason I am doing this article is that I am a fan of Dota2, The International 2019 is an annual Dota 2 world championship esports tournament and I was watching all the competitions at that year.Damonmand (talk) 07:53, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4 / Assignment4 / Damonmand
1. Shantou is my hometown city, and I added a citation for the news about they stop the traditional newspaper and transfer to e-newspaper. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shantou&type=revision&diff=1052822316&oldid=1052432426 3. I learn that add citation is very hard, since wikipedia is been very completely, it takes time to check what it has missed and takes time to search sources.Damonmand (talk) 08:41, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 3 / Assignment 3 / EricaLiu1260
1.My Copyedit article is "KFC in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KFC_in_China
2.A certain product on the menu in this article has been removed, so I will make a note later in order to make the article more accurate. At the same time, the Chinese name of some dishes is incorrect, so I corrected it.
3. At the beginning I was very nervous to edit that. I found out the exact name of the product and the news that it has been removed by consulting the official website of KF China. This can make this topic more accurate. EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:27, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- EricaLiu1260, Nice copyediting of this article. Week 3 is current. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 4 / Assignment 4 / EricaLiu1260
1. My citation article is "Fast food in China". Here is the link, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fast_food_in_China
2. The article mentioned that the amount of instant noodles consumed by the Chinese is huge, but the fact is that the consumption of instant noodles in China is gradually decreasing due to the popularity of takeaway. In order for everyone to understand this issue more objectively and accurately, I think I need to add some quotations. https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fast_food_in_China&type=revision&diff=1052829068&oldid=1034021906
3. This is the link to my citation:https://asia.nikkei.com/Business/Food-Beverage/Chinese-consumers-shift-from-instant-noodles-to-soft-drinks EricaLiu1260 (talk) 09:51, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- EricaLiu1260, Nice citation used. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:12, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week1 / Assignment 1 / Herry3999
Hi, I am Haoran Lin. This is my first time to edit Wikipedia. I hope I can learn a lot in Wikipedia. Herry3999 (talk) 16:47, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
Week 1/ Assignment 1/Katxzhang
Hi everyone this is Katherine Zhang, I just realized I skipped the first post. I am very interested in this project as Wikipedia is one of the most powerful and comprehensive searching engines in the world. I am glad that I am given the chance to contribute to enriching its information coverage that might help later people in the future.Katxzhang (talk) 13:44, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week2/ Assignment 2/ hl4288 RickyLiao
1. The article I chose is "Uzi (gamer)". The reason I chose him is that he is my favorite e-sports player. This article is currently at the start-class level, which means there is a lot of room for improvement. This article does not detail the heroes Uzi is good at and the winning percentage of each hero. 2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:RickyLiao1997/Evaluate_an_Article 3. Before this learning process, I thought that many Wikipedia articles were authoritative and complete. Now I realize that there are actually many articles that have shortcomings that can be improved and improved. More importantly, I learned how to evaluate an article from multiple angles and learned the necessary factors for a good article.
- RickyLiao1997 Please remove the odd formatting around your signatuve. The easiest way is to delete that portion of the code that is not correct and then without skipping a line sign your post again using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 15:10, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor, I have deleted the odd formatting, please take a look at it, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- RickyLiao1997, This is fine now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 18:20, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor, I have deleted the odd formatting, please take a look at it, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week3/ Assignment 3/ hl4288 RickyLiao
Hi, this is Ricky.
1: The article I copyedited is "Yoga Lin". Here is the link to my assigned article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yoga_Lin 2: I found that the article did not cover Yoga’s personal life experience, especially the important information about his marriage, and there are also missing pieces in the single. So I included this information in the article. This is my diff link:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yoga_Lin&type=revision&diff=1052635772&oldid=1045410072 3: I found that editing these contents is a particularly interesting thing, after successful editing, there will be a unique sense of accomplishment. And I can see other people's edits from the historical editors, compare them, and see the development process of the entire article in more detail. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 08:32, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- RickyLiao1997, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor,I have already assigned myself this arrticle in Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- RickyLiao1997, I would have reverted your edits as you made them without any evidence cited to support your claims. However, given another editor improved upon it already, I will leave it as is since others thought it was ok. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 18:21, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor,I have already assigned myself this arrticle in Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:25, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
Week4/ Assignment 4/ hl4288 RickyLiao
1. This week I added a citation on the article about the movie called "you are the apple of my eye" . https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye. The soundtrack of this movie lack a citation, so I add a citation to it.
2. Link to the diff: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=You_Are_the_Apple_of_My_Eye&type=revision&diff=1052639935&oldid=1040961272
3. In this week's study, I realized that the details of the article need to be carefully noted. Sometimes the lack of citations will make the article lack authenticity and reliability. RickyLiao1997 (talk) 09:15, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- RickyLiao1997, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 16:27, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor, I have already assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- RickyLiao1997, Nice edit overall. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:23, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
- Dear Professor, I have already assigned myself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, thanks for your time.RickyLiao1997 (talk) 03:26, 31 October 2021 (UTC)