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Week 5 / HelloWorld9272

For week 5 I edited two articles. The frist one is Scrum (software development), and the diff is here. The source is from an academic article titled: "A Systematic Review of SCRUM in Software Development".

The second article I edited was David Goggins, and the diff is here. The source is from The New York Times, a report called "Death in Navy SEAL Training Exposes a Culture of Brutality, Cheating and Drugs" .

This week I learned how to find the appropriate scholarly literature through Wikipedia entries and add them appropriately.

HelloWorld9272 (talk) 02:23, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

@HelloWorld9272 I saw both your edits were reverted and agree with the reasons the editor provided. Please review what they said about your edits and either add stronger edits to add to the articles or assign yourself different articles to edit. Ping me here when complete. FULBERT (talk) 20:53, 15 November 2023 (UTC)

For Week 5 I edited two articles. The first one is Wenzhou-Kean University, and the diff is here. The source is from New York Time.

The second article is University of Nottingham Ningbo China, and the diff is here. The source is from The Financial Times.

This week I've learned how to look for supplementary information to round out an article. HelloWorld9272 (talk) 04:07, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@HelloWorld9272 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 23:59, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Week4 / Artisticrush

Hey, I recently edited 2 articles. The first article I edited is - Data structure#Implementation and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_structure&diff=1184654745&oldid=1178166750.

The second article I edited is - Database transaction and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Database_transaction&diff=1184659292&oldid=1182056183

I have assigned myself the 2 articles. Editing a Wikipedia article has taught me that it is important to be objective and neutral in my writing, and to cite my sources carefully. Have also learned to be more specific for example, I replaced "transactions" with "transactional databases" to be more descriptive. A good learning indeed. Thank You. Artisticrush (talk) 21:06, 11 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush You inserted links to the citations instead of inserting the citations themselves. Please fix these in the articles and ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:08, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Hey Professor, I have updated what you have asked for. Thank you. Artisticrush (talk) 22:30, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 00:03, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 4/Ritalyo

This week I edited two articles.

The first article is Gender equality,here is the diff.I've added a case about a developing African country like Kenya to give the topic a more diverse range of supporting evidence.

The second article is Higher education in China,here is the diff. I have added a couple of sentences to talk about the challenges facing higher education in China from a faculty member's perspective.

This week I learned how to find reliable sources for editing Wikipedia so that the information conveyed by my edits is genuinely helpful to others.Ritalyo (talk) 04:22, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

@Ritalyo Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:11, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi Professor, I have assigned myself these two articles, thank you for your reminder! Ritalyo (talk) 01:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@Ritalyo Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 00:07, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 4 // AnubhutiJ28

Hi! Thank you for the extension.

I contributed and added citations to 2 articles about alcohol abuse.

1) Drinking culture: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Drinking_culture&diff=1185278100&oldid=1183848016

2) Alcohol abuse#Social Stigma: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alcohol_abuse&diff=1185278965&oldid=1184773357

It has been fun learning and I'm also glad to be able to learn more about topics that I wouldn't necessarily know in depth about in order to contribute to articles. Anubhutij28 (talk) 18:51, 15 November 2023 (UTC)

@Anubhutij28 Please fix the links to the diffs and ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi, sorry for that. I have fixed the links to the diffs. Anubhutij28 (talk) 18:55, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Anubhutij28 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 00:09, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6 / Rhiheat

This week, I edited two articles:

1. I added a couple of sentences on Hyundai Motor Group building a manufacturing plant in the United States to build flying taxis and we could see a first test flight as early as December 2024. Here is the diff.

2. I added a paragraph on a data leak that exposed 665,000 members of Marina Bay Sands and the potential repercussions it could pose to these members. Here is the diff.

This week I learned how to find more articles that needs editing. I've discovered that digging deeper into news articles in niche topics is a great way to find articles that need editing. Rhiheat (talk) 20:36, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Rhiheat Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 00:19, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week2 / Blingffz

User talk:FULBERT/Archive 146#Week 2/Blingffz

I signed myself this article, so please check for it. Blingffz (talk) 21:52, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Blingffz Nice edit. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:23, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

week 4/ChrisMisu

The first article I edited is Generic drug, here's the diff

I added the context discussing the relationship between the brand-name drug price and its generic drug price, suggesting the policy makers and the generic companies should consider how to encourage the market diversity instead of taking price wars.

The second article I edited is Drug development, here's the diff

I added the example of Pfizer to demonstrate how to improve drug success rate to improve their industry position.

ChrisMisu (talk) 03:56, 11 November 2023 (UTC)

@ChrisMisu Your second edit was reverted, in part because your source pointed to something that was not findable. Either correct the reference (as long as it is to a credible source) and add your edit again or assign and edit a different article. FULBERT (talk) 21:04, 15 November 2023 (UTC)

@ChrisMisu I see you did this under Week 5. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 00:28, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

week5/chrismisu

Hi Fulbert, since someone deleted my change to the article generic drug, I unassign this article and edit 3 new articles this week.

1.drug pipeline : here's the diff

I add context about the situation that the pipeline investment may face failure.

2.medication costs : here's the diff

I add context about the costs for clinical phase 1,2,3

3.pharmaceutical marketing : here's the diff

I add context about the negative effect of using coupons for consumers ChrisMisu (talk) 03:01, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

@ChrisMisu Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:28, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

week5/ Lotsobear555

This week I edited the article History of artificial intelligence, I added more information about the birth of AI. Here is the diff. I also edited Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on the food industry, I added more information about how COVID-19 impacted the food industry and how food industry adapted to it. Here is the diff.

This week I'm more used to how to edit Wikipedia and find more interesting articles, nice exercise! Lotsobear555 (talk) 15:42, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@Lotsobear555 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:39, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 5/ Kiki6789

This week I edited the article Sleep disorder and Sleep cycle. For sleep disorder I add a introduction sentence for definition, for sleep cycle I add the difference between adults and infants. Here is the difference, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sleep_disorder&diff=1185721336&oldid=1184386315 https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sleep_cycle&diff=1185722786&oldid=1170917154. Thank you. Kiki6789 (talk) 16:45, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@Kiki6789 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:41, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 5/KawhiKawayi

This week I edited two articles Running and Hangzhou, I added information about Hangzhou landscape significance and running benefits in mental health of social connection respectively. Here are the diffs: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hangzhou&diff=1185751383&oldid=1185280777, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Running&diff=1185755449&oldid=1184006896.

Now I am more familiar to how to search and edit the Wikipedia articles, joyful experience!

KawhiKawayi (talk) 20:48, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@KawhiKawayi Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:42, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week5/ HELLOEXTRACREDIT

This week the first article that I editted is Quantitative analysis. the diff is here.

The second article that I editted is Efficient-market hypothesis , the diff is here.

This week I editted two article about quantitative analysis and efficient-market hypothesis. Those two article both explain how using the quant model in the machine learning. Letting me know more about the basic logic. HELLOEXTRACREDIT (talk) 23:30, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@HELLOEXTRACREDIT Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:46, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 5 / SUpercool2154

This week, I edited Six Flags (the diff is here) and Iberian wolf (the diff is here). I included citations for both articles.

In my edit for Six Flags, I added more information about the financials behind a recent merger between Six Flags and a rival amusement park company called Cedar Fair. I learned more about the mergers being conducted by one of my favorite amusement parks. I also added more information about the diet of the Iberian wolf, and I learned that the Iberian wolf can be found all across Eurasia and has a wide variety in its diet as an apex predator in all of its habitats. SUpercool2154 (talk) 00:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@SUpercool2154 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 00:49, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 7 / Rhiheat

This week, I edited two articles:

1. I added a few sentences on Molicel, a lithium battery manufacturing company investing close to $800 million in a new plant in Western Canada. Here is the diff.

2. I added a couple of sentences on MediaTek announcing their newest chipset which is equipped in Android phones and is AI ready. Here is the diff.

Similar to last week, I learned that even small edits can make a huge difference in giving readers knowledge. I learned that while some new information may be minor, it could still help a Wikipedia page stay updated.

As this is my last Wikipedia assignment, I feel like I've definitely learned a lot from the experience. Besides learning on the technicalities of how to edit an article, I've also learned how to do it correctly, including using reliable sources to edit articles. But more importantly, I've learned that to contribute to a community like Wikipedia has been very fulfilling if I'm being honest. Like many others, I've been using Wikipedia since I learned how to get on the Internet and I think being able to give back to the community has been very worthwhile. While I don't plan on actively editing Wikipedia pages after this assignment is done, I do plan on editing articles that I come across that I know needs updating, as I would definitely still like to be able to contribute to the community. Rhiheat (talk) 21:11, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Rhiheat Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:21, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

I have just assigned these articles to myself. Thank you! Rhiheat (talk) 00:37, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@Rhiheat Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue with it. Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 00:51, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6 /Jz5863

This week, I edited the article fitness app and Activity tracker. The diff for my edit are here and here. The citation highlights how AI and wearable technologies are being utilized to enhance athletic training and performance, offering insights into the evolving landscape of sports science and fitness technology.

In reviewing the article for the Wikipedia edit, I learned about the significant role of AI in advancing wearable sensor technology in sports, enhancing personalized training and health monitoring. Jz5863 (talk) 23:43, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@Jz5863 Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:48, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi professor, I have assigned me the articles. Thanks! Jz5863 (talk) 01:58, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@Jz5863 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 15:01, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week5/ Ritalyo

This week I edited two articles.

The first article is Head teacher, here is the diff.I added the roles and responsibilities usually played by head teachers and principals in the United States.

The second article is Academic administration,here is the diff.I have added a few sentences to the membership of the Academic administration of the American University to make the membership part clearer.

This week I've learned to be more careful with the details so that people can have a clearer understanding of the topics they need through the information I provide. Ritalyo (talk) 02:17, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@Ritalyo Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:11, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

week 5/Alexis0705

here is my editing for this week ：https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Values_in_Action_Inventory_of_Strengths&diff=prev&oldid=1185816625 Alexis0705 (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@Alexis0705 Please finish all parts of this assignment for this week and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:16, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 5 / Anubhutij28

Hi, I edited two articles this week: High-functioning alcoholic and DISC assessment

Here are the diff links respectively: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=High-functioning_alcoholic&diff=1185804942&oldid=1181372477 and https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=DISC_assessment&diff=1185805941&oldid=1180508933

I am just continuing to learn how to navigate wikipedia better, and it's been fun! Anubhutij28 (talk) 03:17, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@Anubhutij28 Your first edit does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE; it appears to go to a dissertation. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Your second edit goes to a government webpage that does not support your claim. Please either assign yourself different articles and add credible sources or edit what you already did to address these concerns. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:18, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6 / Anubhutij28

Hi, I added citations to 2 articles this week:

1. H&M#Slave and child labour : Diff link - https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=H%26M&diff=1186290752&oldid=1186103337
2. Gender diversity : Diff Link - https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Gender_diversity&diff=1186291265&oldid=1184598411

I think the best part about this assignment is to learn more about different subjects. So fun! Anubhutij28 (talk) 04:47, 22 November 2023 (UTC) Anubhutij28 (talk) 04:46, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@Anubhutij28 Your edit to the H&M article does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. As discussed in the assignment and class, always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to the one you edited. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:31, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

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Week 5 / EdereOmnes

This week, I edited the article Hippopotamuses in Colombia and Government incentives for plug-in electric vehicles: Difference between revisions. The diff for my edits are here here and here. I am glad that I was able to contribute EdereOmnes (talk) 03:01, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 15:13, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you EdereOmnes (talk) 14:21, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6 / EdereOmnes

This week, I edited the articles Car rental the diff is here and Plastic pollution the diff is here and here (there are two diff because I forgot the citation). I am glad that I was able to contribure EdereOmnes (talk) 04:20, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 15:14, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you EdereOmnes (talk) 14:21, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

week5/leozgzzz

I edit Sociology and Gamification. With the development of science and technology, traditional sociology is also developing into the digital field. Additiaoally, the adding to gamification is what I feel everyday with soccer games, xp, bages, and progress indicator drives players to engage more. Diffs are here, sociology , gamification. Leozgzzz (talk) 20:53, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@Leozgzzz Please fix the citations via the training here and ping me when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 00:45, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Hello prof, I fixed the citations, and the new diffs are here, sociology, gamification. I met a problem that my week4 post was deleted due to the late edit... Can I make up a new one, Thank you!Leozgzzz (talk) 06:50, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Leozgzzz Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 17:31, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

week4/leozgzzz

i edit Rookie card, the diff is here. I updated the latest cooperation of MLB and fanantics. It's a good sign that sports card is highly active in important league.

second is basketball card diff is here. I updated the biggest basketball card trade in last 5 years, and card values help me clarify how big is this indutry and people are willing to pay for players they like.

My previous week4 post was deleted, this is a new one, and I made changes, please take a look, thank you!Leozgzzz (talk) 06:58, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Leozgzzz Nice catch up on these edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:32, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

week 5 / Artisticrush

Hey, The first article I edited this week was Data and information visualization here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_and_information_visualization&diff=1186146124&oldid=1181497312

this edit was to clarify the primary goal of data visualization. The original paragraph mentioned the importance of communicating information clearly and efficiently, but it didn't explicitly state that the ultimate goal of data visualization is to transform complex data into easily understandable visuals. By adding this sentence, the paragraph provides a more concise and focused description of data visualization's purpose.

The second article I edited this week was Data analysis and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Data_analysis&diff=1186118669&oldid=1184777430 .

I've added a line to connect the topic of nonlinear analysis to the context of computer network systems and security.

Editing Wikipedia articles is crucial for maintaining accuracy, relevance, and inclusivity, ensuring a dynamic and reliable information source for users worldwide. Thank you. Artisticrush (talk) 05:55, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush Your edits were reverted as they provided opinions and did not follow the WP:NPOV guidance. Please review this link and either re-edit what you did or assign yourself new articles and make new edits. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:29, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Sure, I have edited two other articles now.

The first article I edited is Literature and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Literature&diff=1186818996&oldid=1186634962

The added line emphasizes the contemporary significance of oral literature in the context of preserving indigenous languages in South Africa, highlighting its crucial role in cultural preservation, linguistic diversity, and social justice.

The second article I edited is - Predictive analytics and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Predictive_analytics&diff=1186826832&oldid=1183464189

The added line emphasizes the crucial role of adapting analytical procedures to specific datasets, acknowledging the evolving nature of financial scrutiny highlighted by auditing standards.

It's been fun editing articles from different areas, learning about new topics.

Thank you. Artisticrush (talk) 19:07, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 17:36, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

week 6/ Artisticrush

Hey, The first article I edited this week was Distributed agile software development and here's the diff [1]

The added line connects the broader context of distributed agile software development to the specific content of the provided abstract. It highlights the motivation behind implementing distributed agile software development, emphasizing its strategic importance in addressing the evolving landscape of the software industry and the need for efficient task allocation.

The second article I edited this week is Object-oriented programming and here's the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Object-oriented_programming&diff=1186136516&oldid=1185356437

The added line emphasizes the significance of abstraction in programming languages, especially within the context of object-oriented languages. Learned acuracy and how to maintain relevance. Thank you. Artisticrush (talk) 05:58, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush Your edits were reverted as they provided opinions and did not follow the WP:NPOV guidance. Please review this link and either re-edit what you did or assign yourself new articles and make new edits. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 15:29, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@Artisticrush One of your edits was reverted as they provided opinions and did not follow a Neutral Point of View WP:NPOV. Please review this link for the guidance there and either re-edit what you did or assign yourself new articles and make new edits. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:40, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

week6/ChrisMisu

1.Inflation reduction acts here's the diff

add context about the how IRA helps with drug price negotiation

2. pharmacoeconomics here's the diff

add context about one of the influences of drug innovations

ChrisMisu (talk) 15:36, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@ChrisMisu Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 17:42, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6 / SUpercool2154

This week, I edited Black skimmer (diff here) and Japanese badger (diff here). I added citations to both pages on each animal's specific dietary habits. For the black skimmer, I added information on chick feeding habits. For the Japanese badger, I added more about the seasonality of the badger's omnivorous diet. I'm enjoying learning more about different species' seasonal diets each week! SUpercool2154 (talk) 21:31, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

@SUpercool2154 Nice edits and an interesting selection of articles you edited. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 17:45, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Week6 / kiki6789

This week I edit Plastic pollution and Black Friday (shopping). I added more background information for plastic pollution. Here is the difference for these two articles: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Plastic_pollution&diff=1186849756&oldid=1186574266

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Black_Friday_%28shopping%29&diff=1186850609&oldid=1186803301 Kiki6789 (talk) 22:12, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Kiki6789 Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 17:48, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 6/KawhiKawayi

This week I edited the articles: Taoism and Machine Learning. I added the Taoism philosophical vision and MLA application in stock prediction field respectively. Here are the diffs: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taoism&diff=1186961549&oldid=1186196706, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Machine_learning&diff=1186963150&oldid=1186722015.

The exciting experience brings me deeper recognition towards the areas where I'm interested in.

KawhiKawayi (talk) 16:10, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

@KawhiKawayi Very interesting selection of articles you edited this week. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 17:53, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

week6/leozgzzz

I edit self-driving car, diff is here. I added a new research to self-driving car that monitoring driver's behavior makes driver safe.

Second is Electric vehicle, diff is here. The government of California and New York aim to reach zero-emissions in 2035.Leozgzzz (talk) 16:14, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Leozgzzz Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 17:33, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Hello prof, I finished assigning, please check, thank you! Leozgzzz (talk) 18:08, 26 November 2023 (UTC) Leozgzzz (talk) 18:08, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

@Leozgzzz Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Week 7 /Jz5863

This week, I edited the article Exercise prescription software and Sedentary lifestyle. The diff for my edit are here and here. The citation I included was from an article by Chen, H.-K., Chen, F.-H., & Lin, S.-F. (2021) regarding an AI-based exercise prescription recommendation system. This served as the evidence for the new content I introduced.

Through this process, I learned about the importance of AI in modern healthcare, specifically how it can be applied to combat sedentary lifestyles. The experience provided insight into the evolving nature of exercise prescription and the potential of technology to personalize health interventions.

My overall experience with this Wikipedia editing task was enlightening. It was an opportunity to contribute valuable knowledge to a public domain, helping to disseminate information about innovative health solutions. I learned the intricacies of responsible editing, including the necessity for accurate citations and adherence to Wikipedia’s guidelines to ensure the reliability and neutrality of content. Reflecting on this task, the value of contributing to a platform like Wikipedia became clear. It's a way to engage with a global community and make a tangible impact on the dissemination of knowledge. Whether or not to continue editing on Wikipedia is a personal decision. For me, it would depend on my commitment to sharing knowledge and engaging with topics of personal or professional interest. The sense of community and contribution to a larger body of knowledge can be gratifying reasons to continue. Jz5863 (talk) 19:31, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Jz5863 Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue with it. Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 48, 2023)

Institute for sports science in Japan Hello, FULBERT. The article for improvement of the week is: Sports science Please be bold and help improve it! Previous selections: Human-centered design • 3dfx Get involved with the AFI project: Nominate an article • Review nominations Posted by: MusikBot talk 00:05, 27 November 2023 (UTC) using MediaWiki message delivery (talk) on behalf of WikiProject AFI •

Week6/ HELLOEXTRACREDIT

This week the first article that I editted is deep learning. the diff is here.

The second article that I editted is Autoregressive moving-average model, the diff is here.

Those two article described deep learning model using in finance field. Helping me to know more about how the new tech using in this field and how the model to process. HELLOEXTRACREDIT (talk) 04:29, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

@HELLOEXTRACREDIT Please fix the article you linked to in your post here and ping me and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 17:52, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Autoregressive moving-average model, fixed it HELLOEXTRACREDIT (talk) 02:08, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

@HELLOEXTRACREDIT Nice edits. Current with Week 6. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Week 8 / EdereOmnes

Reflecting on my experience with the Wikipedia extra credit assignment, it was indeed a captivating journey that deepened my understanding of how Wikipedia wordss. Engaging in the task of editing several articles allowed me to contribute valuable and pertinent information to the platform.

I appreciate that the professor introduced the class to this unique opportunity. It not only expanded my knowledge of Wikipedia but also provided a hands-on learning experience with the platform. The process of researching and editing articles was both educational and fulfilling.

I am motivated to continue editing on Wikipedia. The experience not only allowed me to share knowledge but also emphasized the collaborative and dynamic nature of this widely used platform. I see the potential for ongoing contributions as a means of sharing information and participating in the collective effort to enhance the quality of content available to a global audience.

" EdereOmnes (talk) 02:32, 27 November 2023 (UTC) "

@EdereOmnes Nice edits on these two final articles, and thanks for the overall feedback on this. I hope you find Wikipedia editing useful and continue with it. Let me know in the future if you ever need any support or help with it. Current with Week 7. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Asawa ng Asawa Ko

Draft:Asawa ng Asawa Ko had sources, until someone removed all the references for zero reason.[2] How come the article is quickly sent went to draft space, when someone vandalized the article by removing all the references in the article? TheHotwiki (talk) 01:24, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

@Hotwiki Thank you for your message here. If you think the references and citations can be re-added, then please re-add them and move this article back into live space or ping me and I can help move it back. FULBERT (talk) 01:30, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

I've readded all the references. All the references are third party references. TheHotwiki (talk) 01:32, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

I don't know how to move back the article into live space. The editor that removed all the references, has a history of vandalizing articles in Wikipedia. TheHotwiki (talk) 01:39, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

@Hotwiki I moved the article and it is now live and marked as patrolled. Keep an eye on it for future vandalism. Thanks for your positive focus on this effort. FULBERT (talk) 04:02, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the help and assistance! TheHotwiki (talk) 04:15, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 7 / EdereOmnes

This week, I edited the articles Air traffic controller and also Near miss (safety). The diff for my edits are here and here. I am glad that I was able to contribute. EdereOmnes (talk) 14:51, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes Please finish all parts of this assignment for Week 7 and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 15:15, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi professor, I'm having difficulty identifying what is specifically missing from week 7. Could you please provide more details or clarification? EdereOmnes (talk) 15:31, 22 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes The short reflection. FULBERT (talk) 17:35, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi professor, completed. EdereOmnes (talk) 18:20, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes You have still not completed this portion of this assignment, namely "write a short reflection explaining: Describe what your experience was like (overall) with this Wikipedia extra credit assignment. Discuss what you learned. Why / why not do you intend to continue editing on Wikipedia." Complete this in reply and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:49, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Good morning professor, completed. EdereOmnes (talk) 13:38, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

@EdereOmnes All current, and glad you found this to be an interesting experience. I hope you continue editing! FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 8 December 2023 (UTC)