Elyriz
Hello, testing out the talk page!Liuxia26 (talk) 00:15, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
HMB436H1 - Introduction edit
Hello, Elyssa, what a beautiful name! My name is William, thank you for the wishes. I wish the best of luck for your assignment and semester too! Gyrodrew (talk) 05:54, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
- Hello there! I am your fellow classmate, Anastasiia. Good luck on assignment!
Assignment 2 edit
Looks good so far. Nice blend of references. Make sure you fix the ISBN references. Here are a couple of additional interesting facts: known from ripening grapes (ISBN 978-3-540-85462-3); nosocomial allergic alveolitis (ISBN 978 92 890 4168 3), occurrence in night air (Annu. Rev. Phytopathol. 1977.15:1-13), the incidental subject of a poem, ["The Sporobolomycetologist" http://www.mhs.mb.ca/docs/mb_history/47/poetscientist.shtml] (with musical score) by eccentric Canadian mycologist Arthur Henry Reginald Buller. Medmyco (talk) 14:16, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
Feedback edit
Hello Elyriz. Your article looks detailed and very well researched. However there are a few conventional mistakes like there is a space before the period. Ex. The genus Sporobolomyces as well as the species Sporobolomyces salmonicolor were coined by Klyver and Neil (1924) . Also Sporidiobolus salmonicolor is bolded and italicized when it should be only italicized. Brendanguyen5 (talk) 22:24, 29 October 2014 (UTC)Brendanguyen5
Article Feedback edit
Hi Elyriz! You've done a wonderful job on your article! Just a few suggestions, I did notice a few typos I think you may have missed, in the sentence 'contained lipid-rich globules', you may have meant to write contain? Additionally when you've named all the things that the fungus can grow on you missed out on the and for the last one. Overall a very interesting read! — Preceding unsigned comment added by JuhieAhmed (talk • contribs) 15:08, 31 October 2014 (UTC)