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Your submission at Articles for creation: Miyuki Tani (October 10)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Netherzone was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Improperly sourced draft, that reads promotionally, for example, "exceptional, famous, inspired by, leading, more than, renowned, showcased, worldwide". Draft needs to be cleaned up to read with an encyclopedic tone, sourcing needs to be improved to confirm notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Netherzone (talk) 18:02, 10 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hello, EdgarEdo! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Netherzone (talk) 18:02, 10 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your kind message, it really encouraged me! I now understand why the article was declined. I'll look into more resources, remove any content that lacks proper sources, and try submitting it again. If I still have any questions, I hope I can consult with you.

Thank you again! EdgarEdo (talk) 01:46, 11 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

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