Peer Review! (Andres Garcia)

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After carefully reading through your portion of the Wikipedia assignment, I feel there are some parts in your article that could be linked to other Wikipedia articles (biomaterial, wound healing, copolymers, hydrolysis, amorphous, and polymeric). I understand that your paraphrased most of the context, but you should include proper citations throughout your portion of the assignment (Papers that you deciphered, websites you used, etc.). I think your assignment could benefit from using one his current publications that illustrates this. Overall, I think the information you presented was intriguing and I think you did a great job at explaining the purpose of his research and his lab’s finding. AndresG95 (talk) 23:32, 22 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


Welcome!

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Hello, Eddie garcia1892, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Alvin Joseph Melveger (November 18)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 04:08, 18 November 2016 (UTC)Reply


 
Hello! Eddie garcia1892, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 04:08, 18 November 2016 (UTC)Reply