User talk:Ebomer1/sandbox

Latest comment: 9 years ago by T.J.Hebert in topic Review

Review edit

First off your page looks great with a couple nice figures thrown in, however maybe add in a couple more and possibly a cross section of the basin if possible. I really like how you have the detailed sections on the Stratigraphy and divided it into different subsections. One thing I see that could use a little tweaking is the wording. Wikipedia is meant as a resource for anyone to learn about a topic. This means some people who do not know much about geology will get lost in some of the wording (this is not a major problem just something to keep in mind). Overall your page looks great and has a good format and flow to it. You should have very little left to do before the final submission great job. T.J.Hebert (talk) 18:22, 23 February 2015 (UTC)Reply