User talk:Drsharma78/sandbox
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Kairyth
Hi David,
Excellent work!
I have a few comments:
- Make sure you're using the correct level of header - right now your sections are 2nd level headers, once you put the article live on Wikipedia they should be 1st level headers (big text with the line across)
- Word count is 728 not counting references - I'll give it to you this time but for the final draft be sure to add enough words to get the count over 800 ;)
- Citations look great! You might want to consider formatting them so you don't repeat the same citation more than once, ie. So you'd have [1] several times rather than [1] [2] and [3] being the same source
- You have a gift for writing about history - very well done!