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Peer Review

Black Twitter

There may be an analytics tool you can use to gauge the hashtags' popularity. I'd recommend looking into this, as the most memorable hashtags as listed in your sources may not be the strictly most popular, based on number of uses. I also recommend providing quantitative demographic information, if possible.

Black-ish

Is this a proposal for a new section, or will it fall under the Critical Reception section? I think the article will benefit from the addition of this information, but I don't clearly see the connection between the episodes. You've listed racism, police brutality, and daily struggles. What's the umbrella topic here? Why do these three topics go together? If the umbrella topic is hardships for Black Americans, what else can fall under this category?

Black Feminism

Beyonce and Amber Rose aren't the only modern black feminist figures, correct? If you're going to add this section, I think it should include more people. Alternatively you could constrain the section to something like black feminists in pop culture.

Overall Comments

I think your proposed edits will benefit the articles. So far, it looks like most of your sources are publicly-available articles. Remember that you need at least 15 sources to be peer-reviewed publications.

Atticusbixby (talk)

Response

Thank you for all the feedback. Everything was very helpful and will improve my pieces greatly.

I will be adding the following
Black Twitter: Analytic and quantitative statistics for each hashtag, eliminating the ones that show low popularity
Black-ish: Place under new section called "Episode Content Addressing Racial Inequality"
Black Feminism: Will include more modern black feminist figures that are within and expand beyond media.
Sources: Include at least 13 more peer-reviewed publications
--Dmlee26 (talk) 02:22, 9 November 2016 (UTC)