Dman F1
Joined 23 June 2010
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Chaosdruid in topic Edits containing words not necessary
Edits containing words not necessary
editHi
Sorry to have to put a downer on your otherwise fine work on the articles you have edited.
Wikipedia does not really like words that "big up" a person such as weasel words or peacocking such as "is famed for", "his aggressive style" or "dominant performance". It is better to use "is known for", "his driving style" or "in his performance".
In the time it has taken for me to write this though I notice you have removed some of them lol
anyway happy editing and welcome to Wiki