Deyvin888

iCloud

Hi, thanks for trying to expand iCloud with this edit. May I give you a couple pointers?

Your edit had an unencyclopedic tone and sounded like a how-to guide (see WP:NOTHOWTO and WP:NPOV for why we don't do that); it also didn't cite reliable sources. Feel free to read some of our featured articles to see examples of good encyclopedic writing. Best, DFlhb (talk) 11:48, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for the advice! Deyvin888 (talk) 11:50, 4 June 2023 (UTC)

Lede of 2022 in Ukraine

A flag of Ukraine to break up the text

Hello Deyvin888, I hope you're doing well. I appreciate your contributions to the article 2022 in Ukraine, but wanted to tell you I have largely removed the lede you created. A lede should be an introduction into an article, so in this case an introduction into what happened during the year 2022 in Ukraine. While an overview of Ukraine may work for similar articles, it didn't fit the best here for this reason. I hope you decide to stick around on the project, as Wikipedia is always in need of good editors to maintain and expand the website's factuality and coverage 🙂 If you have any other questions, feel free to contact me on my talk page, otherwise you will probably see me around on other Ukrainian articles. Cheers! Johnson524 (Talk!) 03:20, 5 June 2023 (UTC)