David gregg
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I'm afraid I've reverted your edits here. As the welcome message says, all material must be cited to what we refer to as reliable sources, please read WP:RS. As editors, we cannot add our own ideas/thoughts/research to articles, this is what we call original research, WP:OR. In other words, a Wikipedia article is very different from an ordinary journal article or an essay, where the author can make arguments, try to prove a point, insert their own idea based on the work of others, etc. Dougweller (talk) 15:36, 12 September 2010 (UTC)
- You need sources that explicitly, for instance, make the point (with which I agree) that " the possible transmission of Egyptian myths to neolithic Wiltshire is problematical as is the idea that the Egyptians / Pythagoreans and Aubrey Circle builders independently developed an eclipse prediction method," or " The proposed Aubrey construction heptagon may also define other Stonehenge features." Articles should normally not use 'we' or ask questions, or use language such as "very curiously". It can be a big learning curve for those of us with an academic background. Basically our articles report on what other people have said explicitly about a subject. Have you read WP:OR yet? And this 'heptagon', has this been published somewhere and if so where? You should also use WP:Edit summaries explaining your edits. Dougweller (talk) 16:16, 12 September 2010 (UTC)