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The article that I chose is neutral. It is an informative article. (Danielagordillo (talk) 23:17, 23 March 2020 (UTC))Reply

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What you must know about animal abuse edit

I've moved this page back to your userspace. This had multiple issues with it:

  • This article duplicates the existing article on cruelty to animals, which already defines the topic and lists the laws in place against animal cruelty.
  • This is written as a call to arms against animal cruelty. While no reasonable human being would disagree with your sentiments, Wikipedia is not meant to be used as a platform to persuade readers to see things in a certain light.
  • Wikipedia cannot be used to source itself, as Wikipedia is not seen as a reliable source. It's important to use the strongest possible sourcing when editing in general, which is typically going to be things like academic and scholarly sources, as well as articles written by trusted authorities and newspapers like the New York Times.

This should not be moved back live and I would instead focus on seeing if there is anything major missing from the articles or trying to find a stub article that needs expansion. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:35, 7 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Shalor (Wiki Ed), Danielagordillo has moved the article (without apparent changes) to mainspace, What you must know about animal abuse. Schazjmd (talk) 21:07, 13 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Nm, tagged it for speedy deletion. Schazjmd (talk) 21:12, 13 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
I've deleted it, editor needs to realise that this is an encyclopaedia, not a free platform for campaigning Jimfbleak - talk to me? 05:37, 14 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

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Hello, I noticed that you recently created a new page, What you must know about animal abuse. First, thank you for your contribution; Wikipedia relies solely on the efforts of volunteers such as you. Unfortunately, the page you created covers a topic on which we already have a page – Cruelty to animals. Because of the duplication, your article has been tagged for speedy deletion. Please note that this is not a comment on you personally and we hope you will continue helping to improve Wikipedia. If the topic of the article you created is one that interests you, then perhaps you would like to help out at Cruelty to animals. If you have new information to add, you might want to discuss it at the article's talk page.

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