User talk:Dada1916/The Storm on the Sea of Galilee
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Ngomes99 in topic Peer Review
Peer Review edit
Hi, Olivia you have strong opening. I saw that you had a note not knowing if you should leave in the fact that the art was stolen, I believe you don't need it there because you have another section about the art piece and how someone go it. I think you could just put that there. The sections where nothing is written you have notes and it looks like you know you are going with the article.
The language used is perfect, it's direct and it's what we need to use for this article assignment. The references look good, so more would be good but since you are going to add more info there's no need to worry about it know. There will be more when you have that information in. Ngomes99 (talk) 22:56, 11 April 2023 (UTC)