Courtneyreeder

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (October 12)

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--  Kethrus |talk to me  18:18, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Courtneyreeder, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! --  Kethrus |talk to me  18:18, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

Copyediting an article: Death of Aaliyah

I deleted obvious bias in the background section.