Courtneycheasley
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Hey Courtney. Your article is looking really good! I only have a few suggestions that might slightly improve the flow of the article. In the first paragraph, I don't quite understand this bit of text: "In 1976, Julie married Bill Brown, a painter, exhibiting her first solo exhibition as Julie Brown in 1982, Disclosures: A Photographic Construct’ held at the Central Street Gallery." If this was a bit clearer, I think the opening biographical paragraph would be great. Also under the Influences section, I don't think it's necessary to have "-Julie Rrap" after the quote, as long as the reference is there. Maybe double check with Louisa, but I think that's right. The awards and exhibitions sections are great and clearly show everything she's done. There are also a few grammatical errors which could be fixed up too. Otherwise, I think it's looking great so far! Good job :)
James Jamesthorn001 (talk) 10:19, 21 April 2015 (UTC)
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Hi Courtney! edit
Great to see you are getting familiar with Wikipedia! Let me know if you have any questions. Louibu (talk) 20:20, 4 March 2015 (UTC)