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RE: Carlos Coy.

This is an encyclopedia about him, not an in-depth analysis of his court case. Nar Matteru (talk) 13:42, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

The length should also reflect the notability of the person in question. Theres a lot more notable people than this no name rapper who only passes notability for eating out a nine year old, and most of their articles are much much smaller.

Secondly, the article should be about the person as a whole, when there's more information about a single court case (after your edits 80% of the article was devoted to it) than the rest of the person, it is no longer a biographical article.

I hope I'm not discouraging you from further editing, your contributions are certainly welcome, just not 20k worth on only one aspect of his life. Nar Matteru (talk) 21:07, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

I honestly don't know. I mean, for Micheal Jackson, theres aSeperate Article for his incidents. However, Micheal Jackson is much much more notable than Carlos Coy. His music has mostly local popular support, and like you stated, the attention given to his case is also pretty local (though it did make it to the news here in Louisiana)

Why don't you try condensing it down a bit and weeding out any opinion by other people (the state psychologist was an expert witness in the trial, so she can stay, but the sample of the trial transcript is a bit much, would work better as an external link) Actual evidence against his convition is definitely welcome, just try and keep it smaller. Nar Matteru (talk) 04:28, 22 August 2008 (UTC)