Chnugent
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Welcome edit
Welcome to Wikipedia! I look forward to seeing your contributions. Before proceeding, be sure to assign yourself an article on the course dashboard. Smojarad (talk) 17:48, 30 August 2018 (UTC)
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Hello, Chnugent, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:52, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
Notices of discretionary sanctions edit
This is a standard message to notify contributors about an administrative ruling in effect. It does not imply that there are any issues with your contributions to date.
You have recently shown interest in pseudoscience and fringe science. Due to past disruption in this topic area, a more stringent set of rules called discretionary sanctions is in effect: any administrator may impose sanctions on editors who do not strictly follow Wikipedia's policies, or any page-specific restrictions, when making edits related to the topic.
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Jytdog (talk) 04:58, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
This is a standard message to notify contributors about an administrative ruling in effect. It does not imply that there are any issues with your contributions to date.
You have recently shown interest in Complementary and Alternative Medicine. Due to past disruption in this topic area, a more stringent set of rules called discretionary sanctions is in effect: any administrator may impose sanctions on editors who do not strictly follow Wikipedia's policies, or any page-specific restrictions, when making edits related to the topic.
For additional information, please see the guidance on discretionary sanctions and the Arbitration Committee's decision here. If you have any questions, or any doubts regarding what edits are appropriate, you are welcome to discuss them with me or any other editor.
Training edit
Please do the training, especially the section on Editing health and psychology topics, before you go further. Please. Pinging User:Ian (Wiki Ed) Jytdog (talk) 05:01, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Feedback edit
Hi. I wanted to give you a little feedback on your contributions thus far. First, as Jytdog mentioned in the section above, biomedical topics have special sourcing requirements. Please make sure that you complete the recommended training module before proceeding further.
In the case of the music therapy article, there are several issues. The first has to do with the relationship between claims and sourcing. You wrote
Masaru Emoto has experimented with the effects that music has on water forming crystals.[1] His experiments showed that different songs reflected different crystal formations.[2]
References
- ^ Radin, Dean; Hayssen, Gail; Emoto, Masaru; Kizu, Takashige (2006-09). "Double-Blind Test of the Effects of Distant Intention on Water Crystal Formation". EXPLORE: The Journal of Science and Healing. 2 (5): 408–411. doi:10.1016/j.explore.2006.06.004. ISSN 1550-8307.
{{cite journal}}: Check date values in:|date=(help)- ^ "masaru emoto". www.masaru-emoto.net. Retrieved 2018-09-11.
The first source you used talked about people "focus[sing] positive intention", which is not the same as music. The other issue here these are extremely unexpected claims, and the idea that "extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence" seems to apply here. Even more importantly, these sources do not tie the idea of crystal formation to music therapy, which is the topic here.
You also added that "The human body is made up of about 60% water". While this is factual information that's well-sourced, when placed next to the claims about Masaru Emoto's work, it seems like you're suggesting a mechanism by which music therapy can work. This counts as "original research" on Wikipedia, which is something that's not allowed.
On the earthing therapy article, you added
Skin needs to be either in direct contact with the earth or with an electrically conductive surface such as a metal.[1]
References
- ^ "What is Earthing?". www.earthing.com. Retrieved 2018-09-11.
In this case, the source you're using does not meeting the standards for a reliable source - it comes from a website promoting the practice. Even for claims not related to human health, you should be relying on scholarly sources for your additions Wikipedia. In this case, because it applies to human health, the sourcing requirements are considerably more stringent. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:23, 11 September 2018 (UTC)