ChloeSmeltzer

After reading this page I have several suggestions for making it better. I noticed that there are no specific sources listed in the sedimentary proxy section of the article which makes me question its credibility/reliability. Adding in the source here would be a smart move. Secondly I think that EPICA should have been explained as it was mentioned in the ice cores section of the article instead of under the limitations heading at the bottom of the article. Lastly, in the Earliest atmosphere section the author should change their wording form "would have been" to "was". saying "would have been" In the context of the section almost makes the author seem unsure of their own information and saying "was" sounds more sure, giving the readers a stronger sense that what they are reading is correct. ChloeSmeltzer (talk) 22:11, 22 February 2017 (UTC)

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