User talk:Chinny11/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Cdnbyu in topic Great Work
- I like what you've added so far. When deciding what to do for an image you might consider looking for a real image of magnetic tweezers, as opposed to the couple of cartoon images that are shown.
- I would add some more to your "history and development" section. I think that you are already planning on doing that already though, but just thought I'd throw that in there.
- I would also recommend that you add an outline of what you plan to add to the page (kind of a checklist) that way everyone can see where you are at in the process.
- I didn't see any typos, or other punctuation errors. Good work!
Great Work edit
I think that this is shaping up really well. I think that it would be very helpful to add links to other pages in Wikipedia such as maybe links to the scientists or other things that would be nice to know. I might not necessarily say the past 15 years because in 5 years it should say twenty and it would be high maintenance to do that. Very Good Work! Cdnbyu (talk) 18:27, 16 November 2016 (UTC)